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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yo keep it comming
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April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No fluffy or angsty...more like a grey ending.....Naruto becoming more jaded
and criminal like...while "silencing" those what tried to rattle him....and
dominating some women....it would be "soo sad" if Shikamaru and Shikato had an
'accident'....and Naruto had to 'console' the widowed Yoshino Nara...what would be
so 'glad', of support him when the election of Rokudaime comes in the future...
and criminal like...while "silencing" those what tried to rattle him....and
dominating some women....it would be "soo sad" if Shikamaru and Shikato had an
'accident'....and Naruto had to 'console' the widowed Yoshino Nara...what would be
so 'glad', of support him when the election of Rokudaime comes in the future...
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April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Shameless smut addict and lurker that I am, I profess that your story has compelled me to dispense with lurk and review.
Very sexy story here and I like the fact that Naruto still has some moral hangup to what he's doing (if mostly ruthlessly squelched by his hormones and the meddlesome fox).
As to how it should end - I say go for the angst AND a final fluffy resolution. BTW, did Naruto ever memorize the way to RELEASE the (sex) slave jutsu?
Very sexy story here and I like the fact that Naruto still has some moral hangup to what he's doing (if mostly ruthlessly squelched by his hormones and the meddlesome fox).
As to how it should end - I say go for the angst AND a final fluffy resolution. BTW, did Naruto ever memorize the way to RELEASE the (sex) slave jutsu?
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April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
SWESOME! Have him do the slave jutsu on Sasuke later on, and if I may request that Hinata be spared... Oh another twisted idea, have him do it on Kyuubi LOL
Tleilaxu
Tleilaxu
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April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying this story! I'd personally like to see a fluffy ending, where things work out for everyone. It doesn't seem reasonable that Naruto's morals would allow him to keep up a jutsu-enforced slave harem forever...
But of course if you weren't going for any sort of realism and just wanted to make it a smut-fest I have no problems with Naruto enslaving all the females in the village and then some... (I would just bemoan the waste of a good story opportunity) :P
Keep up the good work. It's always nice to see some well-writing het stuff on AFF.
But of course if you weren't going for any sort of realism and just wanted to make it a smut-fest I have no problems with Naruto enslaving all the females in the village and then some... (I would just bemoan the waste of a good story opportunity) :P
Keep up the good work. It's always nice to see some well-writing het stuff on AFF.
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April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I say fluffy-bunny ending or whatever as long as Naruto as his harem, it would be cool Kyuubi would be a chick and get her in the jutsu.
Get ANko, Kurenai, Shizune, hell even Tsunade. Temari definitely
Get ANko, Kurenai, Shizune, hell even Tsunade. Temari definitely
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April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your story, just wished you could do a little more detail into the lemons! And I say you pair them off, Naruto ending up with Sakura, and the rest someone else, cause Sakura deserves Naruto alone, with nobody else! Sorry, NaruSaku freak!
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April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please, no angsty ending. Although the means don't necessary justify the ends, there's no doubt in my mind that Naruto deserves this after all the hardships he's suffered. I prefer that Naruto get a fluffy ending in this story. Oh, and great work on the lemon. Very erotic. Update soon!
P.S. Is Temari going to be a part of this? Or maybe Ayame? God I hope so!
P.S. Is Temari going to be a part of this? Or maybe Ayame? God I hope so!
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April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is good. So the next girl is Ino, what about Anko?, everyone knows is a freak. How Tsunade, Shizune? Put up your next Chapter.
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April 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic. This story has just so much potential... And I can't wait to see Naruto make Sakura happy! xD In a very perverted way.. and regular ways :p