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April 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So far you have done an excellent job with this story. I honestly love it. I think that you should have the girls do a contest to see which one is going to be the "Queen" slave of Naruto's little harem. You know all his little slaves playing with his Kage No Bushins. One question does the "victims" of the Slave no jutsu remember anything when they are released? I can't wait to see who else will join in his little group.
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April 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Plz stick with the NaruSakuIno, I don't really care what you do with the other girls
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April 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well it's good, really good!
Hope to se more..
Hope to se more..
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April 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was great. You did an excellent job. Looks like Naruto will fuck two girls in the next chap. But I'm afraid of what will he do when he's too over use of the slave no jutsu.
Well anyway, please continue!
Well anyway, please continue!
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April 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
how about the Jutsu accudently brakes after he clams another girl like say hinata (hint hint) and Naruto finds out they knew they were being controled and that they loved it and thay want to stay his sex slaves. of course that is just a thought but if you use it give me my Props (Proper respect)
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April 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love the story! go with the Fulffy bunny ending
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April 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a very good fanfic and I really enjoy reading it.
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April 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you should stay with the 'happy ending' lol
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April 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not bad this is becoming a vary insteresting story, and as for your little thing on if the end should be an angsty one, or one thats some what fluffy I say you might want to go with it being some what fluffy because if you look at it Naruto has had enough crap in his life and he needs some thing really good to happen to him when you look at it.
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April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
excellent intro. i look forward to the next chapter.