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April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wait, did he look the scroll over, and then burn it? I hope so. This would make an interesting harem fic. Maybe Temari could be included...I love NaruTema. Update soon!
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April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting beginning.
Enough to have me come back to read the next chapter.
Till next time... adios.
Enough to have me come back to read the next chapter.
Till next time... adios.
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April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice story. It is well written and i like where you are going with it. Please update
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April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is well written, and an okay concept. But honestly, Naruto doesn't need some whacked out jutsu to build his own harem of slave girls :p
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April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting turn of events, and you should just keep this fic where it is the reason I'm saying this is, because if the main pairing is still Het then its where it should be.
O by the way for a first-timer your doing a vary good job writing this fic so just keep going and see where this takes you.
O by the way for a first-timer your doing a vary good job writing this fic so just keep going and see where this takes you.
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April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
master i beg of u make more chapters please this story is so good please dont drop it
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April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome!!!
keep up the story
keep up the story
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April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, I liked it. Can't wait for the upcoming smut :P
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April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A good twist. The consequences of the next morning should be interesting to see. Update soon!
Oh, and I'd keep this in het so long as that's the main type of pairing. It makes it easier for the people already familiar to the sotry to find it.
Oh, and I'd keep this in het so long as that's the main type of pairing. It makes it easier for the people already familiar to the sotry to find it.
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April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like what you've written so far and I can't wait til the next chapter. Good job and please update soon.