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December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi guys im so sorry it took me this long to update with school and work, and some family issues I got throwed off, so i did two chapters and im gonna keep doing two when i update and hopefully i have somthing by monday.!!!!!!!! Thank you guys for reading!
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August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the story, one problem though. Everything is all cluttered together, and that makes it difficult to read. If you could perhaps have different paragraphs where people start to speak and such, like they do in novels, it would be much easier to read. thanks
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August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Didn't you have a bunch of chapters up? What happened. Oh well I still like the story thank you for updating!!!
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August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry, I'm just trying to improve the story, and I hope you guys like this more so let me know what you think!
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July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh that was so good i loved the movie and i love your fic teehee
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June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Very interesting, I like it a lot hope you continue it soon.
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June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...Please, please do some research beyond just watching a movie if you plan to write something based on practices that are traditional. I know most people don't find it fun... but research is often what makes writing good (a beta reader will also help immensely). Here are some links that you might find useful:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Homosexuality_in_Japan
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kagema
http://www.glbtq.com/social-sciences/japan.html
http://www.thekeep.org/~kunoichi/kunoichi/themestream/taikomochi.html
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Homosexuality_in_Japan
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kagema
http://www.glbtq.com/social-sciences/japan.html
http://www.thekeep.org/~kunoichi/kunoichi/themestream/taikomochi.html
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June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story!!!!!!!! I love it!
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May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I'm really sorry that I haven't been able to beta your stories, and I will beta them don't worry. But please don't update your stories without showing it to me first so I can fix the errors, I have a really hard time fixing the errors after it's been made public...I don't know why, but I just do.
-Damp *I swear to you that you will have the beta'd versions of your fics by the end of this week!!*
-Damp *I swear to you that you will have the beta'd versions of your fics by the end of this week!!*
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May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aww dat was just yummy n o so cute. XP i like dis fic
so far n im hopin for an update soon. best of luck. ur new
fan AoiKitsune =^-^=
so far n im hopin for an update soon. best of luck. ur new
fan AoiKitsune =^-^=