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July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah! Although this sequel was a lot shorter than A Stray Child, I know how tiring fanfic writing could be! i swear, sometimes, I just want to stop writing all together, then I'll either get an idea or a really great review!
Great sequel, anyhow! I loved it! And I didn't comment on this in the review to ASC, but I loved the thing about Oro being Sasuke's father and Sasuke getting his snake-like genetics! Spitting venom rules!!
Loved it!!
Great sequel, anyhow! I loved it! And I didn't comment on this in the review to ASC, but I loved the thing about Oro being Sasuke's father and Sasuke getting his snake-like genetics! Spitting venom rules!!
Loved it!!
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June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Grate chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read what happens in the next chapter so UPDATE SOON..........................
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June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Boy, that Iko person is in trouble now. When Naruto finds them...wow, I can't wait to see what he does to them! Hurry with the next chapter!!
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June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A 'weaker' Sasuke is still pretty damn scary. Next: Naruto saves Sasuke! Hot, its so good to see you again Lemon!
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June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke will kick there asses if they try to do smth!!! I hope so! update!
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June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*bonks your head*
people doesnt speaking up does not mean all people hate it. there are people enjoying your story and its just that some are not too adept in speaking. (women....*shrugs*) but i guess it brought up messed up and wrong signals. oh well.
everytime you read this review be assured that there are people waiting for you to update. they might not be speaking but they sure are wanting to know what happens next.
people doesnt speaking up does not mean all people hate it. there are people enjoying your story and its just that some are not too adept in speaking. (women....*shrugs*) but i guess it brought up messed up and wrong signals. oh well.
everytime you read this review be assured that there are people waiting for you to update. they might not be speaking but they sure are wanting to know what happens next.
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June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(LAUGHS) very good story. You are very good writer. Even when I am depressed this story makes me happy again.
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June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Since I joined here I have read just about everything you have written and you have become one of my favorite authors, so please continue. I am really interested in reading what happens. I haven't reviewed any of your work before because I am always busy, but now that I know you don't feel like continuing this story I wanted to leave a comment and beg you to reconsider.
BrokenHeart
BrokenHeart
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June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm interested in this story!
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June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm interested - please continue.