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November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooooh! i definately want to read more of this! it was really great...also.. i love the maury show!
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June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awe this fic sounds fun!!! I cant wait to see how naruto reacts when he does see Sasuke again, cuz we all know Sasuke won't chicken out of a bet =D Yay! Now i get to ponder how their daye will go ^__^ I'm looking for to your update!
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June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is such an orginal storyline!
I love the look on Naruto's face when he realized he acctendality sold himself. I was like Oy, he's so stupid but because he thinks of others before himself it made sense for him to do it without realizing. Please continue this. I'm dying to know how Sasuke finds out how to contact him.
I love the look on Naruto's face when he realized he acctendality sold himself. I was like Oy, he's so stupid but because he thinks of others before himself it made sense for him to do it without realizing. Please continue this. I'm dying to know how Sasuke finds out how to contact him.
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June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Heh he he. You know...I've only seen the Maury show once in my entire life and the episode I saw was about troubled teens. I didn't know he tackled topics like this? Maybe I should watch it more often.
The first chapter started strong then seemed kind of rushed near the middle and the end but I didn't mind that you didn't write about what happened during the rest of the show.
I give the humor in this fic two thumbs up. It's not forced nor is it too obvious (you know, the kind that makes you want to groan and shoot yourself in the head), it's perfect, especially when Karin thought Ino was a guy. It was pretty hard to restrain my laughter so as not to disturb my neighbours at 1:00 in the morning.
Zabuza's in prison huh? I bet he killed somebody...he killed somebody didn't he? XD (I'm not sure if you get bail on murder charges though so I'm just being silly) but it's a nice touch of drama there at least there's a hint of seriousness amongst the hilarity.
I'm not a big fan of Sasuke x Naruto but I'm a HUGE sucker for Sasuke x Naruto AU fics and I'm hooked already. I hope you get around to working on the next chapter, or if you've already started then I'll love you forever.
The first chapter started strong then seemed kind of rushed near the middle and the end but I didn't mind that you didn't write about what happened during the rest of the show.
I give the humor in this fic two thumbs up. It's not forced nor is it too obvious (you know, the kind that makes you want to groan and shoot yourself in the head), it's perfect, especially when Karin thought Ino was a guy. It was pretty hard to restrain my laughter so as not to disturb my neighbours at 1:00 in the morning.
Zabuza's in prison huh? I bet he killed somebody...he killed somebody didn't he? XD (I'm not sure if you get bail on murder charges though so I'm just being silly) but it's a nice touch of drama there at least there's a hint of seriousness amongst the hilarity.
I'm not a big fan of Sasuke x Naruto but I'm a HUGE sucker for Sasuke x Naruto AU fics and I'm hooked already. I hope you get around to working on the next chapter, or if you've already started then I'll love you forever.
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June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hehehe very funny. Poor Naruto. Poor Sasuke. ;P can't wait for the next chapter.
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June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hahahaha, wow, this is definitely an awesome fic!! I was cracking up and thinking of times I watched the Maury show in these instances and was proven wrong! Hahahaha! Keep the chapters coming because I am dying to see Sasuke's next move!
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June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
REALLY great start!!.. hmmm, but I wonder how Sasuke plans to contact... or will he at all??.. I mean.. the bet was he had to ask the person out.. not technically go out on a date with them... XD.. so he already held up his end!
I'm really looking forward to the next chapter though!!
I'm really looking forward to the next chapter though!!
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June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL, I love this!
Please write more!XD
Please write more!XD
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June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hope you continue - this story sounds interesting.
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June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this! More please!