rate_review Reviews

I REALLY LIKE THAT LAST LINE ABOUT A BLOOD STAINED CHILD,YOUR RIGHT VAMPIRES DO LOVE BEAUTIFUL THINGS IF YOU THINK ABOUT IT.WHAT DID HAPPEN TO KONOHAMARU ANYWAY IS HE DEAD OR SOMETHING OR ONE OF NARUTOS FALLOWERS?INARIS MOM DOESNT DIE DOES SHE,I REALLY HOPE NOT.HOPE YOUR NOT TO BUSY ENOUGH TO NOT UPDATE ANYTIME SOON.GOOD LUCK AND HOPE YOU CAN

Hmm... So this is a SasuNaru story right? And Naruto is older than Sasuke, which is rare....

Update soon onegai? ^_^

I'd read this before, when you first put it up, and it was okay, it was good. But you changed it, right? You changed the letter. I like it a lot more now, I mean before it was good but now it's like WOW! LOL XD. I'm really glad you fixed it, because the story has so much potential and apparently so do you, because very few people actually have it in them to go back and fix their work, to make it better. A lot of the time all it needs is just a little tweak and it makes a world of difference, like this. I'm so happy I decided to read it again. Now I really need an update XD. I'm really excited about this, Thank you, Ja.

Very interesting start! Naruto being the vampire is always a good change. I love the tone and the atmosphere of the story! Can't wait to read more.

Interesting and definatly captivating. It's kinda weird to see/read Naruto acting so mature and commanding, but I suppose it's better then him being a bubbly idiot (don't get me wrong, i don't mind Naruto as such but for this role is would be too childish). HA, Sai's his servent...who was the messenger? Anyway, I am definatly intregued. Please update when you can.

Wow. You tease with exquisite taste. Please, continue this.

I like it so far. A few rough patches that could use the touch of a beta but the plot is solid and shows promise.