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June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Can you make Sasuke suffer? And like make him regret that he hurt Naruto... Sasuke doesn't deserve Naruto if he hurt him so bad. It would be very nice if this would or might end up as HakuNaru... ^____^V
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June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well yeah, you gotta post some more. That was nothing but a shameless tease. I'm afraid I can't write a really in depth review because there's not enough there to tell if the story will be any good or not. However your grammar and punctuation aren't bad and you did manage to portray the emotion quite well. If you keep posting I'll keep reading. ^.^
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June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, I have to say that the beginning really sound promising!!^o^b
I'm all exited now and this is just a little bit of the story!:D
I just hope to god, that Naruto isn't going to be all "I want you back Sasuke/ I die for you" - uke like. The are like 100 billion story's like that.:S
I mean, a experience like this even if it hurts in the beginning - will make you stronger and more careful to HOW your give your feelings to.
And Sasuke hurt Naruto BAD: so make Sasuke WORK HIS ASS OFF to earn that trust and love again.
Keep up the good work and update soon, ne?:D
I'm all exited now and this is just a little bit of the story!:D
I just hope to god, that Naruto isn't going to be all "I want you back Sasuke/ I die for you" - uke like. The are like 100 billion story's like that.:S
I mean, a experience like this even if it hurts in the beginning - will make you stronger and more careful to HOW your give your feelings to.
And Sasuke hurt Naruto BAD: so make Sasuke WORK HIS ASS OFF to earn that trust and love again.
Keep up the good work and update soon, ne?:D
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June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow the storie made me cry i would like it if you continued it i want to see what happens please and thankyou
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June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(O.O) SasuNaru! ... (T.T) Why... Why... Noooo.... Sasuke's so mean... Come here, Naruto.. If he doesn't want you, I DO!! *sniff sniff* Anyway, you have my interest in reading more. So, don't stop, ey? I don't have cookies with me now for you, but will a candy do?
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June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You definitely shoud continue!!!
Who was that person who saw bleeding blondy, I realy wonna know!!! update!
Who was that person who saw bleeding blondy, I realy wonna know!!! update!
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June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sasuke can be such a dick sometimes....well all the time actually. but hey, i like him that way!
and yes you should continue!!!!
and yes you should continue!!!!
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June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very sad, but overall a good story. Please update soon.
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June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AWW!!! ;___;
So sad! Poor Naruto, I'm going to beat Sasuke up!*grrrr*
So sad! Poor Naruto, I'm going to beat Sasuke up!*grrrr*
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June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg.. Sasuke is... weird... sadistic... well, that was a short one but I'd love to see more.