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for Mr. Right

by ringpop

person Synn Black
schedule December 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please please please finish.
I luffles it.
Oh and if you need a beta for anything in the future just give me a look up.
I rather beta than write.
Well . . .
Ya.
But this is an amazing story.
Lots of love coming at you.
:) <3
schedule March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
gah! you have no idea how happy i was that there was new chapter out!!! it really made my day-- so thank you!! *kisses you on cheek* XD
person Dragon7
schedule March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.
person hisoka
schedule January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
though i dont really know what a beta is or what they do i could help you if you want, but if you adk me please have patiance i really dont know whatto doing and have never been a beta before im a fast learner though. if its just support i can give alot
person hunter sunday
schedule January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I agree that you should get a beta i am willling to do it but i will not go easy on you I will tell you if i think something is wrong or needs improvement
but dont think i will always be an ass because i wont i will complament you whwn you do a goood job.
My Review on Mr. Right I liked it a lot i loved the plot it had good um... tast it was a littel boring at first but it did pick up so i give you a 3 star rating .
any ways if you need a beta seend me an email.
schedule January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Girl don't let this get to you. You should be writing because YOU enjoy it. Your joy transmits to your fans and they enjoy your talent. If you need ideas me and my beta can help you if you are willing. Shes full of ideas and if it wasn't for her I don't think I would have been able to finish half the stories I have done. Shit if it wasn't for her I would have just stopped with my flop of a first story. If you need a rest take it. I have waited for your updates before and I have no problem doing it again. The main thing is if you are happy. Don't let the thoughts of pleasing others cloud your heart. I think anyone whose a real fan will understand your plight and agree. Sometimes we need someone else to make our recipes work.
schedule January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sweetheart you know I don't have a problem with helping you, why didn't you ask me? I'm on the verge of quitting because I have too many stories running through my head and no outlet. Plus nobody wants to read my stories...I'll gladly beta for you if you want me to. It's not like i have anything else to do. The story I'm working on right now probly isn't going to be posted because nobody reads them anyway. it's called Red Candy Roses...I dont think i told you that. Anyway IM me (im usually invisable) ~Rain~
schedule January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope you find a beta you cant quit its such a good story... please continue. ONEGAI!
person noezel7
schedule January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I would love to beta your stories. I've been reading them for a while and I love how you write. Please don't give up, though I do know how you feel. My one story I didn't post a new chapter for two months and I felt awful, but people still read it when I did post a new chapter. Let me know if you want me as a beta. I would feel honored.
schedule January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey Girline! I'd feel sad for your plight if I didn't know that you've probably already got a bunch of offers. ('Cause who wouldn't want to work with genius.-^^-) I've never done the beta thing, nor have I used one, but I'm going to offer my services anyway. I'm sure you're just bursting with good ideas and I'd love to help you jell them into a full-on plot. Be forewarned, I wouldn't 'let' you begin until you had a complete outline with all the major snags worked out. That being said, I won't be upset if you pick someone else. Just make sure that whoever you choose, leaves your style fully intact. It's the best thing you've got going for you.

Hope you get up and running soon!
dagget