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for Mr. Right

by ringpop

person crimson_moonlight
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I just read this story for the first time all the way through, and I regret not reading it earlier! This story is AMAZING! The KibaHaku pairing was a little wierd for me at first, but now I love it! Especially after this last chapter!
Hmm...shark attack, huh? Kisame wouldn't happen to be making an appearance, would he? XDD
You are an amazing fanfic writer! Can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I dunno what the second story is but the first on is Tranquil Blue I am still waiting for it to be updated as well.And I am waiting for you to reveal who the dude at Sasuke's place is named
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG, another awesome chapter... I have been reading this story since you first posted it, but I just now decided to come out of hiding and review... I am such a bad reviewer.. I always forget... although you think I would since I write as well and know how much reviews mean to the authors... but yeah anywho...

This story rocks on so many levels... and this new little visitor for Sasuke...((Suigetsu???))...Might spell trouble for them...

Well can't wait for more...

Oh and on a last note, I think the fic you are looking for is "Tranquil Blue" by Animehead.

Update soon. ^^

-Akiru-
person devil child
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the author is animehead and the story is called Tranquil Blue you should read all her works I love 'em. I also really love your stories too
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loke sooo close to get a nosebleed right now. thank you sooo mutch!
person Dragon7
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love it who is that guy that was looking for Sasuke? Anyway update again soon.
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AHhh hot smex yes yes yes yes :D nice!!! heh, give us another one of those cause they're great!!! The fic and author you're looking for would be animehead 'Tranquil Blue' although I'm sure someone else has probably told you in the reviews lol :D anyway cool update, thanks ^_6, give us the next one soon?

hina xXxx
person Darkcherry
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG THAT WAS CUTE!!^^ wow Kiba and Haku really had it going on!! that was soooo cute!!^^ you really picked a good place to send Sasuke and Naruto on there little vacation SANDEIGO RULES!! sorry it's that I've been there before.Hey one question though is Sasuke going to get some more action in Sandeigo? (sorry if I spell it wrong) and who was that guy that was looking for Sasuke? and what was that grin for when Kiba told him that he went out with Naruto? Is he going to do something bad???!! NNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOO!!! SOME MANY QUESTION NEED MORE ANSWERS!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE I'M BEGGING YOU!! I WILL WAIT FOR EVER!! STILL NUMBER ONE FAN OF YOUR WORK!!^^
person Rosebud
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I laughed my ass off when Naruto and Kiba were making their significant other's jealous. That was just too funny. Heheh...
So, Sasuke knows someone in SanDiego huh? Wait...Sharks? And then Kisame! LOL, is Kisame the person that Sasuke knows??? I wonder? Hum....o.0 And if so will he be a problem later on in the story?
Oooohhhh....I can't wait for the next chapter!
Keep up the awesome job! XD
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"YES! SCREAM MY NAME HAKU!" Kiba shouted, as he slammed into Haku's ass continuously.

"*Girly Scream* KIBBAA!"
i think that was my favorite part. for some reason i was laughing my ass off when i was reading that part out loud with a friend right next to me. who was also laughing at how i was reading it. i am still wondering who the strange person that was asking for sasuke. i can not wait for the next chapter. love you. marry me please.