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for Mr. Right

by ringpop

person AoiKitsune
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
dat was yummy! cant wait 4 ur next ch. til lates
AoiKitsune =^-^=
schedule July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ohayo! I got your comment. Haha. I was laughing too when all this came to my head. And yes, it will be eventual Sasuke/Naruto..there will be Gaara/Neji as well..and Sakura is just kindof like there, as a motherly figure...
person hisoka
schedule July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
its cute so cute i almost got cavities. so freaken sweet keep it up
person Sunflower
schedule July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I, LOVE, this story! I mean, I've seen quite a few fanfics in my day, but this has to be one of the fluffiest, happiest, most BESTEST stories I have read. Keep up the good work! ilu~Sunflower!
person Anon
schedule July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this story is really fantastic... but Haku and Kiba? i will wait eagerly. bye!
person Rosebud
schedule July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn that was HOT!
I want more lol!!!!
person LadyWolf
schedule July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
MORE! MORE!!! Please....! I thought this was so hot. Naruto...Seme...That's hot! All other Fics that I've read, Sasuke was Seme....I love it!

Please, pretty please with sugar on top, continue. I've become addicted, please supply me with my fix!!!!!
person Bluesake
schedule July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! Loving the updates too. : D
person Darkcherry
schedule July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! OMG!! that was a great chapter!!^^ please please write more I really like your story!!^^ I CNA'T BE THEY'D GONE TWICE IN THE MORNING AND THE NIGHT IW OULD HAVE BEEN TIRED BUT HEY IT'S HIM!!^^ CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!^^ HURRAY FOR YOU!!!
schedule July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a nice chapter, but something deep inside is telling me that something is going to go wrong. I don't feel like crying. I loved the love making in the shower it was great. Thanks for updating so fast. I can not wait for the next chappie!