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for Mr. Right

by ringpop

person Word_Slave
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, that I'm enjoying this... Which kind of surprises me. I don't know why, it just does. But I really can't wait until Sasuke takes Naruto... Please...
Oh, and please don't skip the curses, you know the ones durning the smex... But I'm loving the characters, and it sounds like you're having fun...
Oh, and get your ass moving and write more...
Please
Slave
person Darkcherry
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Finally!! Naruto told Sasuke those three little words!! YAY!!^^ and finally some smut!! about time it was also funny when sasuke was 'uke' write more I LOVE THIS STORY I NEED TO READ MORE!! will anything happen between the two? WRITE MORE!! IF NOT I'LL KILL MYSELF!! J/K!!!^^ PLEASE WRITE MORE!!
person Chria
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it was hot...wooo
person AoiKitsune
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
gah :drool: damn dat was hot. i luv it must have more
plz update soon. heh i luved da begining we der was 2
much goin on around dem 2 get da deed done. heh well i
wish u da best on da next ch. Ja Ne AoiKitsune =^-^=
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First off i want to say An asome lemon of and asome chapter to an asome story. I loved the description and love you conveyed into naruto and sasuke during the lemon.

As to a responce the the responce to some of my reviews. 1. Don't blame it on me your the ones that gave Naruto and sasuke the morals when it came to the hot smex, well ok i guess you can blame me what can i say i'm wicked;p 2. In my defence i only threatened to castraight kiba with a rusty spork if he directly came between the smex again. 3. I just wanted to say i'm sorry for the "stupid cliffe but love the story review" i just now relised that it sounded like i was saying the ending was dumb but i actually mean stupid cliffe like "dam cliffe i hate you so much right now (sends cliffe evil glare look) sort of stupid. 4.I loved this story and i don't know if this is the end to Mr. Right if it is i'm sad but i'm going to be lookin out for your other fics if its not i'm glad and still be looking for your other fics. 6. You are offically one of my favorite authors now and forever because you didn't automatically asume i was a girl, so think you so very very much. Once again i loved the chapter and the lemon.

p.s. I'm not that down to earth i have voices in my head and everything, but don't worry they like ur story. HEE HEe j/k i don't really have voices in my head but if i did they would love your story or else i would kick em out.

p.p.s. Sorry for rambling
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Omg that was sexy. I can not wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work. I love you too i totally think we should get married
person gaara89
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good job!! Please keep up the good work!
person BlackDiamond
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AAAAHHHHH!!! YESH THE SMEX WAS GREAT!!! =D *kisses*
There is your kiss!!*glomps* ^^
THIS IS MY FAVOTIRE STORY OF ALL TIME plus YOU ARE MY FAV AUTHOR!!!
"RIDE MY COCK" XD What a great chappie name! LMAO! I saw it and i new great smex was comming! =D
I like the little twist that Naru-Chan was the seme. It was deffinately hott!!!*kisses*
I love you again!! *huggles* Thanx for the great chappie!
Ahem...
UPDATE WHEN YOU CAN! xD
[That's my trade mark saying!=D ]
person Chrissy
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh my..this lemon chapter was SO worth the wait *nods approvingly and grins*

Thank you for replying to my reviews, its really nice to know you care enough to do so.
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
About friggin time!
poor Naruto and Sasuke they can never get any privacy...
Hahaha man I know how that goes and the last person who
interupted my privacy had a broken nose and a jammed thumb...

you know privacy is over rated now-a-days...

Anyways I hope for more of your work.