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for Mr. Right

by ringpop

schedule July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh come on!

STUPID KIBA!
person Anon
schedule July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
damn Kiba interrupting at such an opportune moment.......arggghhhh
schedule July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
honestly i loved it when kiba came in - that little bitch comment with naruto coming back out was sweet! keep it up please - though if i were sasuke i would have helped naruto toss kiba!
person cynaga
schedule July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Despite your death threats ;) - I am reviewing anyway because I am enjoying this story so much~! It's light and sexy and fun. THANKS~!
person hina88
schedule July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Naruto has a lot of self control - I would've killed Kiba on the spot looool - talk about tuining the moment, just ebcause he got some he doesn't care about other people who are trying to get some too loool :D I liked the update, it was funny. Hope you come back t it again when you can ^_6

Hina xXxx
person sunsparked
schedule July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my god.... this story had me laughing half the time....i love it! keep up the good work!
schedule July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*screams* kibahaku lime but not sasunaru?! i hate you! *pouts*
person yoai_lover1
schedule July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really liked it plzzz don't give up
person Chrissy
schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I vote to keep the story going :D Excellant writing by the way..i'm enjoying it very much and looking forward to more.
schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love you i love you i love you. thanks for working so hard on this fic. jeep going. i just loved haku and kiba's little scence it was hot. update soon.