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for Mr. Right

by ringpop

schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love it. can not wait for the next chappie!
person blueh
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I really like the story. It's very interesting and funny... but I'm a bit sad that Sasuke asked Haku out. Well, I guess I don't really mind cuz I'm pretty sure this will make the story more interesting and hopefully, Naruto and Sasuke will end up together at some point. Keep writing! I'll be keeping an eye on this.

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person Chrissy
schedule July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a GREAT story, ive enjoyed reading it very much. Naruto is really funny lol. I hope you keep writing, i'll look forward to more..
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so far so good - i like how this is going
i'm hooked - now please update soon!
person hitsufangurl
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was great!!! I laughed so much (the part where he's about to kick Haku's ass at the mall....lmao!!!) I loved it, Update soon, this is on my favorites list!!! ;o)
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved the chapter very nice are haku and kiba goin to hook up at the party? anyway nice chapter and i cant wait for the next one.
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
don't abandon us, everyone is too emo to leave it hereand i can so see another couple chapters worth of emotional torment in it for them. it kinda hurts to read, but in a god way i guess, in a satifying, picking at scabs kinda way.

still, we'd like to see them figure it out in the end
or die crying, either way 0.0
person Yuue
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Waiting for the next chapter...good job...keep at it...
person Anon
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, its something i would say too, in fact i do, quite often...
Oh dear...this is gunna end badly, or hilariously, either way, promises to be a good read, awaiting your next chapter....
person hiddengoldeneyes
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
KibaNaru or NaruKiba is fine... but gah!

no SasuHaku please! OMFG I'm begging you! don't do this!

anyway, glad you updated ^^

hope Sasuke and Naruto will make out... no not that make out... I'm talking about them being friends again... err... but maybe the a real make out session would be really nice ^^

Viva la SasuNaru! XD

Keep up teh good work!

~hige