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for Mr. Right

by ringpop

person AoiKitsune
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww ur just mean how can u do dat?? heh j/k i luv it keep it up.
hope 2 c an update soon. til next time AoiKitsune =^-^=
person sakamui
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Waits patiently....

ps: I really like Sasuke's ringtone ^__^
person yoai_lover1
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG I LOVE IT I WANT MORE PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ

*POUTS* I LOVE THIS STORIE
person yoai_lover1
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG I LOVE THIS STORIE IT IS SO AWSOME I WANNA SEE WHAT HAPPENS PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ

I MUST HAVE MORE
person hige
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome!!!

update soon!
schedule June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love you for updating! but it just makes me want more! update soon and don't give up.
person roro237
schedule June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your story is funny and sexy and a joy to read. I recognize the song Naruto was singing! Looking forward to more:)
person chishio_rikka
schedule June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What are we supposed to be voting on? Maybe I'm just clueless. Hahaha poor Naruto. But I feel bad for Sasuke too. He must be on one hell of a guilt trip right now. hehehe Good story please continue!
person tovah
schedule June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Please continue with it. I think it is starting to get really interesting. I am very curious who Naruto asked to go with him to the party. Maybe Neji? can't wait to find out.
person mr. L
schedule June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww....trouble in paradise? really nice....who's the guy naruto asked? i can't wait....thanx