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for Mr. Right

by ringpop

person kai
schedule June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
comunication is the key,what was the ring tone for sakura that sasuke had on his phone?i like it give you props on everything songs style etc.hope you update soon
person Yuue
schedule June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The story is great good work, i almost laughed when Naruto pulled the straight razor line. (thats not an insult i rarely laugh)
person hiri
schedule June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Naruto will surely become sasukesexual! lol...no bi, homo or hetro here.
They are both so confident but something tells me this relationship will take some time to evolve. naruto has a big ego, will we see a vunerable side? sasuke is a stuck up prick as always. keep the good work up!
person ai-chan
schedule June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
noooo dont abandon story~~
i'll cry! grrrr lol
stupid sasuke n naruto T.T
jealousy is krazieeeee
can't want to see how you will let them make up and kiss hehe
at least i hope you will! lol
shall be waiting for next chapter!
good luck!
schedule June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
im lovin the story, keep writing! it is just such a fun story, and for some reason i can totally see them that way, and the diolouge makes me laugh (often, except when it doesnt)--- keep it up!
person word_slave
schedule June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Um....HELLO!!!! You think you you are allowed to do anything but write???? Get over yourself. Some of us have better things to do that to wait on your ass, especially when you think stuff like sleep is important. (Okay, I think this gets my point across, I liked it and want to see more. Um and yeah, I understand the other life stuff.. 8 years writing 2 books down and nothing pubbed.)
Slave
person Anon
schedule June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke will be either hella jealous or hella pissed!!................. awesome........... update soon!!
schedule June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it I love it I love it! hehe! More please!
person tysonandkai
schedule June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome story!!!!!!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I officially love this story..... the Naruto tung pierced thing very smexy... update soon!