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for Mr. Right

by ringpop

person mr. L
schedule June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
luv your story...nice writing....you really are a funny, imaginative person...thanx for the GREAT chappie...luv u
person zaira
schedule June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG this story is so fantastic!^.^ I love this playful naruto, and even sasuke is so cute! i really really like your story. me (or I? english is not my first language, so sorry) and my boy are waiting impatiently for the next chapter.. write it soon, if you can^.^! bye!
schedule June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NNNNNNooooooooo!!! i want more.this chapter made me laugh it was funny. i just love the clothes that you put on naruto. i just love this story please comtinue with it. don't give up on it. please. please update soon.
schedule June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Now By now they better both see how they're starting to get attracted to one another, with all that flirting, only a person totally blind to this stuff wouldn't be able to see that. I like this story a lot. I tend to go towards the SasuNaru and NaruSasu that are AU/AR.
person hiri
schedule June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sasuke acting all modest (sleeping fully dressed, he's such a BAKA) while naruto is ohh so seductive.. lol! maybe a bite OOC. I can't pinpoint it so...whatever I'm liking it and that's what counts! I wanna write fics too..I admire you for actually getting it done. I'm such a slowpoke myself ^.^ keep it coming and I'll treat you to some cake. (I make delicious cake!) anyway... what's gonna happen next?
person HellKat
schedule June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I like this. It sounds promising, and I'm very intrigued, and interested to see where you take this.

Hope to read more soon.

Thanks for posting.
person hiri
schedule June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke and Naruto goes wedding crashing! lol, They so want each other, they just don't know it yet! me still like this so keep it coming.
person chishio_rikka
schedule June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good story Naruto's funny and well in character so is Sasuke. Neji seemed a bit out but for your purposes it suits him nicely. I hate the word hella. It gets so overused in my town. But for some reason in this story it's almost cute. Keep up the good work and update soon!
schedule June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i said this onece and i will say it again i am really lovin this story. keep it up.
person ai-chan
schedule June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
kyah xD
i think it's a cute story!
sasuke should definitly fight back! lol
the cliff hangers fine
just glad you dont update once a month~ hehe....
please dont! lol
enjoying it!