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for Mr. Right

by ringpop

person Anon
schedule June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*raises hand* question! Who's the uke? :3
person Tyra
schedule June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really cute story!
I like it how Sasuke's blushing and all, and Naruto's being so fun! xD I loved the flirting! xD

Heh, I hope we are going to see more of that ShikaNeji too! They're so cute, and Neji's changed pretty much! Which is good. xD
Update soon again! Keep writing.
person HellKat
schedule June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw man, how could you stop there. I was just getting into it and it ended. (I'm going to cry)

It was good, and the flirting was sweet.

Hope to read more soon. Ja
schedule June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Stares at “Keep your boxers on, usuratonkachi.” *falls to floor and starts to ball like a baby* why why why why!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *gets up from floor* Lets just say i was a little sad when sasuke said that. Anyway great chapter please hurry and update i cant wait to see the rest of the story (espesaly when sasuke says take your boxers off) lol keep up the fantastic work
schedule June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like i like write more pleeeeeeeeeesssseeeeee!
schedule June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
stupid cliffe but love the story.
person lil lilly
schedule June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Even better than the first chapter. I love the way the story is progressing..... Keep em' comin!!!!
person Yabun
schedule June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I finished reading the 1st chapter and just rated the story when I saw 'Next Chapter'. Then I was all, "Yosh! An update already! XXXXXDD"

I enjoyed reading the story so far, and Shy!Sai is so cute XD. 'Til next time...
person badluck
schedule June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(If you’re black and you’re offended, don’t be. It’s okay he can sing this song…I’m black too : ) XD
Many people get offended when people say 'nigga' to their face but in songs its ok to say that. i mean wtf? xD
[im also black btw]
oh, thnx for the cliffie. i loved it abd it was a great cliffie.
UPDATE! I LOVE THIS STORY! =P
person hiri
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
me like! can't wait for those two to meet... it will be awesome!