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for Mr. Right

by ringpop

person lil lilly
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's good, I like. You have peaked my interest, so.... PLEASE UPDATE...PLEASE.....PLEASE....if you don't update imma hafta jump off the hokage tower, ;p
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like there this is going, please continue!
person Anon
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so far, so cool :)
person llyoung
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. I really enjoyed the Sasuke and Neji conversations. Looking forward to the next chapter.
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really like that pokemon part that was funn. i still like that old pokemon. well i am loving your fic. so update soon.