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for Mr. Right

by ringpop

person Kitsune13
schedule September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was such a great story!! i loved it please post the next chapter soon. :)
person hisoka
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
COULDA SWORN GAARA DIDNT HAVE EYE BROWS,HUN...HAKU AND KIBA GET THEIR 3RD GUY BEFORE SAI GETS HIS 1.DOES GAARA KNOW ANYONE CUZ I GOTTA FEALING HE KNOWS NARUTO LIKE LONG LOST CLOSE FRIENDS(NOT AS CLOSE AS FRIENDS WITH BENIFITS JUST PROTECTING EACHOTHER WISE).SASUKES GATTA FIX HIS DREAMS AND STOP THEM THOUGHT HE WAS CHEATING ON NARUTO FOR A WHILE AND WAS SURE HE WOULD COME IN AND SEE THAT WHAT DRAMA THAT WOULD BE.HOPE YOU CAN UPDATE SOON CANT WAIT FOR SAI TO MEAT SUIGETSU AND GAARA,CANT WAIT FOR ANYONE TO MEAT GAARA
person MewMew2
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sexy Character you haven't used yet, the original container for Orochimaru. Oh and have you used Neji yet? I don't recall his appearance.....
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You my friend have some weird ass coupling in here but IT WORKS I can see it I am so happy you decided to update this I am curious to see what Sai's reaction to his possible? Update soon and your others stories as well!
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You know...*dramatic pause* I'm full of ideas *evil smirk* Loved this chapter, can't wait for more.
person despairs
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like Kiba, Haku AND Gaara as supporting characters so i think they would work out well in a threesome :D
BUT i seriously hope you keep the threesome thing with them and not Sasuke and Naruto...call me an old fashion
prude but i only like Sasuke with Naruto. They seem happy and content with just themselves anyways...ya know?
I was so proud that Sasuke turned down his stalking ex just to stay true to his Naruto :D

Anywho...i am also eagerly awaiting Sai's reaction...hope he can keep Suigetsu satisfied so he leaves poor Sasuke alone
Yay for Sai! I was so happy you brought him more into this story...you rock!

I know i'm not very helpful review wise :( i'm sorry...i guess this is why i stopped trying to write a story of my own lol.
person gaara89
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Update soon! I'd like to see how Gaara's interview goes.
person llyoung
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the addition of Gaara to your story.
person Tara
schedule August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I yay'ed like a loser =D *hugs you* OMG! RAPE!
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I yay'ed! Hahaha. Great story. =D