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for Mr. Right

by ringpop

person LadyWolf
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM

Great your back!!!! I was missin' this fic!!! Ahhhh....I just love it when a chapter is added...sweet just like the rest....
person vikuta
schedule August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
... i....i....i did that. i Yay'ed! omg. i didin't even realize thet till i've read your comment. the chapter is the greatest.
person Vivi & Venny
schedule August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Vivi: Glad to be of service! Dunno how, but glad anyway.

Venny: Ha~, yea. She is a really lucky bitch, I keep telling her that.

Vivi: Shut up.....but yea, I guess I am lucky. Yea, I'm black, and look it; except for my eyes. Their really slanted; thus my mamma calls me 'black-anese'. Though both of my parents are black.

Venny: Nice to meet you too, lovly! He does look sexy- well, what I could make out about him was sexy.

Vivi: Wow, I /knew/ Sai was gay.

Venny:Yay! Sakura is GONE!!!......wait...Suigetsu's in on it now? Eh, at least he's better than Sakura.

Vivi: I was so sure that Suigetsu was going to rape Sasuke. Damn, I think Naruto should have broke down the door even if Suigetsu was just joking. Shit, I would have if my bf was locked behind a door with some random guy that said they were having sex.

Venny: Oh gawd, I 'yay'ed. Then stared at Vivi until she went 'Whoopee.'

Vivi: The only reason I did was because he kept staring at me, and sticking out his tounge and licking me! I have Venny-germs on my arm!

Venny:....ya know ya like it~! -starts touching her; gets kicked in the shins- Ow! Fuck, shit, damn it!

Vivi: ^-^ Just say the ending, Venny

Venny: Fucking unstable, whore. I should-, wha? Oh! BYE, LOVELY!

Ja~,

~Vivi & Venny
person Black-Diamond
schedule August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wwoooww...great twist! Suigestu and Sai!? that's actually kinda hott =D
I hope there is smex in the next chappie! plz add it wifey ^^
I love you and your story! *glomps* update when you cann!!! =))
schedule August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was a great chapter update soon
person gaara89
schedule August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good job! i'll be looking forward to the next chapter1
person hisoka
schedule August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sasukes smart to figure that out so fast, glad narutos not mad at finding sasuke in a closet with suigetsu.is itachi dead?
hope you update soon
person Rosebud
schedule August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter! I loved it! I can't wait to see what's going to happen next!! XD
schedule August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeay for Matching. Thank you so so so so so so so very much for updating i was having a really crappy day and i was pissed beyond all reason I probably did make satan look like mary poppins today but you have impecable timing because i read this story and now i'm happy agian (huh maybe i do need a yoai fix every so often so i wont' be witchy) any way great chapter.
schedule August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice....thanks for getting rid of Sakura for me...now she's sleepin with the fishes rofl!!!! anyway great chapter, update soon ne? ja!