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Vivi: You black? We be black too!

Venny:....-cough-

Vivi:...Okay, I be black. Venny's a white boy. But he's the sexiest white boy you'll ever meet! Black hair, pale, lean, dark green eyes, and perceings. So sexy!!!

Venny: Yup, I got my tounge, snake bites, right eye brow, five on my left ear, and one at the top of my right ear done.

Vivi: Tisn't fair! I only got my ears done twice.

Venny: Shit, ALL of your Narutos look fuckin' sexy. I would do ALL of them.

Vivi:.....Hey, is this a SaiXSakura?

Venny:.........THAT DIRTY BITCH!!! SHE STOLE MY SAI AWAY FROM ME!! I'LL KILLL HERR!!! -charges at Sakura-

Vivi:.....-knocks Venny out- Crazy fan boi. Now, besides the SaiXSakura thing, I lurv this~! I like that voice in Naru-chan's head! Half the time Venny kept saying that she sounded like me. Can't wait for the next chap

Venny:...-wakes up- What the fuck happened? -rubs head-

Vivi: You fell and hit your head. And say the ending, stupid.

Venny: Oh, BYE!!

Ja,

~Vivi & Venny

loody doo, aahhh i had stopped reading about 5 chapters back bc naruto came out as seme (and sometimes i feel bitchy and stop reading bc of shit like that lol) but i'm back (not that you'd really care that much lol) and i gotta say GOOD JOB GIRLIE!! tho i still gloss over the narusasu moments as long as you dont make it exclusively that i'll keep on reading cause i really do like this story :) Oh and that last chapter? HOOOOOTTT!!

aww thats cute, i guess thats what horny people do ne screw and sleep.theyll probly never get enought of each other. is suigetsu still fallowing them?what happened to itachi anyway?
i cant really read what i said last time i musta had some were to go.

*stuffs tissues in nose* By far the best lemon out of this story by far. Although i may have to stop reading this story out of health reasons... namly dieing of a nosebleed. LOl keep up the great work.

Ps. IN my defence that bimbo may not have stopped yoai goodness and just fuled it, but point is she tried to stop it by flirting with sasuke as in property of naruto so she had to be punished. As far being brutal without my yoai fix don't be ridculas... I make satan look like Mary f'n Poppins lol. Srry i'm not 25.

This was the hottest lemon ever!!!!!! OMG.....!!!! Definitely continue, please post more!

I think this is my favorite chapter so far!
KEEP IT UP!XD
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!

yay!!!! I love it! you're such a great writer! more please! hehe ja!

nicceeeee!!! X3 i luv it! the strawberries were just 2 die 4!!
but i would have 2 say my fav part was whenn Naruto rode Sasuke
now dat was HOT! heh neways i hope update soon best of luck.
AoiKitsune =^-^=

awesome! that was so good! keep it up!

I am not into ItachiXSasuke so I did not like that part. But everything else i liked it. I didn't have anybody to read it with this time T_T. Cant wait until the next chapter update soon.