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for Mr. Right

by ringpop

schedule August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gah! I loved this chapter. I know it's weird, but I think its EXTREMELY erotic when the uke rides the seme. And I love Sasuke as the Seme and Naruto as the uke. This was amazinG! Did you see the new TOS? You should...please have another chapter like this! I was picturing Naruto..and damn...
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"You look so sexy on me Sasuke. Fuck yourself harder. Make me cum in your tight, sweet ass." that was my favorite part. i read it out loud again with my friend next to me. again she was laughing her ass off. and may i ask if you are male or female cause i would like to know who i am marrying. can't wait for the next chappie so keep it up!
person Raaaaiiiii~
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your story so much! I stayed up all night read it just as I was going to bed. ._.; But anyways, that story you are talking about is called "Tranquil Blue". Very good story, I might add. If you want, you can search "Raikari-hime" under authors on FF.net, and you'll find me!

*headbangs to Shiina Ringo music*

~Raiii
person Chria
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love you too for working so hard on this! I'm thinking they go to the beach and hop on jetskis and chaos ensues! Because the thought of either Sasuke or Naruto busting their ass out there has me cracking up. heh Sex in the ocean sounds pretty hot too. drools.....
person LadyWolf
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it! please write some more!!! They are so sexy it just makes me want to scream!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Lihrah
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
God, Sasu-chan is such a little whore. Heehee! I was right! I am PSYCHIC! BOOYAH! When I was reading the scene where they were sitting in the airport and Sasuke kisses Naruto, a random thought popped into my head and I said it aloud: "They're going to join the Mile High Club." I WAS RIGHT!


YAY! You took my suggestion about Naruto rubbing off on Sasu! I feel special!

Fuck, man, that lemon was some serious hot shit. Like, seriously.

God save the lazy bastards and bitches like us! I still haven't updated my story and it's almost been two months! Eh...heheh... -sweatdrop-

Oh my, You have the image of Sasu in glasses with a pen in his mouth stuck in my head. I might just end up drawing him. If I do, obviously I'll let you know! But don't expect anything!

You keep writing, and you keep liviong! Simple as dat! HAH!

I really think I might be slightly insane.

As for msn, nooo not really, but I do have AIM. It's tnvr600 but random as to when I'm on.

LOVE YA! LIKE, FO' SHO'!!
~Lihrah

Dammit, YOU'RE rubbing off on ME!!
person despairs
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That's one thing about the quiet ones, their always the kinkiest.

LOL that explains alot about me...i'm uh ..pretty quiet myself.

Anywho...Great new chapter, as always. I really like how Sasuke and Naruto
dont want to keep their relationship a secret and give major public displays of affection ;)
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
eek! You scared me at first, when you called me a dirty whore! I thought you were saying you hated me! I was like noo!
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you don't really want me to die do you! Now MissMayumi is sad...but atleast you still love me..
person Dragon7
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Grate chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.