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I really loved this sotry so far but I'm sad to see that you seem to have abandoned this!!!! I really hope that since you are back to writing that you will continue this!!! I'd love to see where this will end!!! I still love the job even more than this story but this is a close second!!!! See you again soon!!!

Oh my god! I love this story! I can't wait to see the rest of this!

just for this tale will i bookmark you so i can read the updates

Ahhh!!! Its taken me 2 days to read the ten or more chapters that I'd missed. lovely! I cant wait for more and i was so upset when the chapter ended...

hhhhmmmmm I like this!!!! Please update soon!!!

Eek! Naruto has gone all nine tails and Shikamaru is plotting ways to kill him. :x

Although I disagree with their assessment. You don't need an Uchiha to subdue the power of the nine tails. The Yondaime did it just fine. (Ok, well maybe it cost him his life, but still!)


Keep up the great work! ^^

Hello, just letting you know you have a new reader. Sorry I came in at the end, but better late than never? I wanted to tell you that this has been an interesting ride so far. You are pretty good, I'll admit. And I happen to be pretty picky with what I read. I drop a fic if it becomes even slightly painful. I read everything in one sitting, so it was wonderful. I do hope you don't mind a little constructive criticism: Watch your 'Your and You're' It is a tricky problem, so don't feel bad. Also, I notice your chapters are getting shorter and feel much more hurried towards the end. This could happen because you are excited to be reaching the end, but it is frustrating to have your responses to your reviews be so long in regards to the story proper. It leaves the reader a little disappointed. It is good you acknowledge your fans, however. On that note, you have no need to respond to this review. Just do your best on this next chapter and that will be thanks enough. Thank you for a very imaginative fic, and I look forward to the next chapter. Well done!

I greatly enjoyed the update. I have faith that Sasuke will save the day. I am getting so excited. I can't wait till the next chapter. I also want to say congrats for keeping me on my toes. Every chapter you give just enough info to explain what happened previously and then leave me guessing again for the next chapter. LOL. It is really fun.

Heh.. as I was reading this chapter I was thinking during the battle of wills between Kyuubi and Itachi that it would be kind of crazy if Naruto jumped him from behind. Remember that scene when Sasuke enters into Naruto's head and confronts him and the Kyuubi arguing in front of the cage? I sort of picture it like that, only right now Naruto's slightly out of the picture. How great would it have been as Itachi and Kyuubi are contesting each other if Naruto just came up from behind Itachi and hit him on the back of the head with a wrench or something? lol

Anyway, keep up the great work!

I just finished reading your new chapter. It was so exciting. Everything is moving. I hope Sasuke can save Naruto. I can't wait till the next chapter.