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I just found this story and noe I'm totally in love with it it! Your way of writing is amazing and the plot has me on the edge of my seat. Keep up the great work and please update soon...

Frist off, Great story, I loveing it. I have just finshed chp 3, about to start chap 4. I saw the challenge in chap 3, and well I know I am 6 chapter to late for the qrizes, but I wanted to see if I could finger out what the name means...

So I tuck up the chanlleng for the fun of it. My resolts are: 1) Akira = Bright, or Clear. 2)Seiko = Force, or Truth. So knowing this, the companshions are 1 of 4 : 1) Bright Truth, 2) Clear Truth, 3) Bright Force, 4) Clear Force. To me out of all 4 of them, #2 sounds the best (Clear Truth), but of coures the others don't sound bad eather, so it could be on of the others but if I had to pick just one I would say #2 it sounds the best to me, and it fits the best too. So ya, am I right? *hopefule smile* Well here is my e-mail ( AngelicChaos81@yahoo.com )

I don't exspact getting any of the prizes, so don't worry about that, but could you email me and tell me if I was right or not? Thanks ^^ Great Work, and I am going to go and finsh the rest of the story you have posted. See ya in the next review! ^____^

woohoo! with each chapter we get closer and closer to the truth~! I can't wait! (Great to see you're still updating!!) =^^=

woohoo! with each chapter we get closer and closer to the truth~! I can't wait! (Great to see you're still updating!!) =^^=

Muwhahahahaah! Yes, I do remember what is going on despite the fact that you seem to change it every now and then. Awesome chapter! Woot! I am glad you've picked this story back up because I really like the premise and where you’re taking this. I enjoy the more mature Naruto as well. Very much a refresher from the younger versions of him that are posted numerously. I just hope that the people I do not want to die will not.

BTW: I have a new e-mail for you to send un-beta'ed chapter to if you cannot get a hold of me to look through them.

*Gives Pineapple Ramue and Botan candy*

This story is so full of intrique. I really like it. Thanks for sharing.

You're welcome! n_n

Mm And I did enjoy it. In fact, I'm enjoying reading the story. It's fascinating. =o

This story is terrible. I wrote better stories in grade school. I'm just messing with you. This is good so far. Often when people do 'Naruto is stronger and smarter than everyone thinks' they go overboard and make him god-like in power and abilities. Just make sure Naruto messes up a little in the big fight that's bound to happen. It keeps the story more real.

On a side note I love that Sasuke was still in prison. I've never seen that in a fic. He's almost always just off of probation or near it..

WAaahH! This is getting so exciting! Poor Naruto....Sasuke's reminiscence of him was so sad depressing....T__T That line hit me deep. Beautiful work!

ooooooohhhhhh, things are getting intresting^-^ Im trying to understand what Naruto is doing, is he really going to sacrifice himself? I hope that he and Saskue(sp?) will get hot and heavy first. heheheh
hope u update soon really good story^_^_^