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for I'm only Human

by VRon8899

person Meg
schedule December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying your story, hope you continue soon. Thanks for sharing.
person Ukagau
schedule December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!! It has been so long since you have updated. I have not known what to do with myself. Actually, that is a lie. ^^ I have been pestering you neh? Anyways, good chapter. I like the ending in the final version. Tsunade slightly scares me sometimes. I am always wondering what Naruto is up to, if the other’s theories are true. Hmmmmmm. You must update again!

In addition: I really liked the section about Sai. The glare –snickers- nice. I have to give props, Ramue, and Botan!

愛してる! 
じゃね:うかがう
person Luma
schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's spelled Jinchuuriki.

Anywho. This is good. Can't wait to see more. x3
person monrque
schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it just makes me wonder what will happen next
person Word_Slave
schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yea!!! I can't wait for more. My only complaint is that it doesn't seem that much is actually happening in the chapters. But then again, that could have something to do with the fact that I WANT more NOW.
;) Slave
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOOOHOOO! Oh the suspense! You keep me on the edge of my chair. Keep it up I only have a little more to go and I'll be on the floor!(LOL)
person Saiou-chan
schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, what is Tsunade up too? And when is Sasuke going to find Naruto and jump him? We all know he's obsessed with him. Is Seiko Naruto in disguidse?
schedule November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! The updates are back!!! ^^ hehehe


Very exciting chapter. Its setting up alot of possibilities. Although ultimately, I think Naruto is going to lure both Itachi and Sasuke into single place, trap them there, and force them to work out their issues through calm and reasonable discussion. Moderated, of course, to prevent any murder from taking place. Then, once the brothers have been reunited, everyone will return to Konoha for tea and biscuits.

Am I right? Yeah, I thought so. ;) Can't wait for the next chapter!!! Tea and biscuits!! <3
person Dynamo
schedule November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG how did i not find this sooner!!
Dynamo <---angry at self for missing out on being one of the first 25 reviwers
you have created a story with some AMAZING potential, i honestly have no clue where you are going with this one
i cant wait!
person Dynamo
schedule November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hmm that review i first posted screwed up... it cut off like a whole rant about me missing out on reviewing chapter one, and all of my praises of your story....i wonder why it did that, ohh well. this is a great story, i honestly have no clue where you are going with this, it kept on suprising me when i was reading it please please please update soooooooon!