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November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your writing is so engaging. The story line is amazing. All your characters are perfectly in character. I can't wait to find out more about Naruto's purpose. Things are starting to get really interesting. Can't wait to read more.
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November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this! But the chapters seem so short, and too long between... but then again that might be just because I like it so much.
Slave
Slave
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November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gah. You review only to leave more questions and perhaps an upset stomach or two in your wake. Nice update. A few problems but none to bash upon at the time. I read it twice to fully understand what is going on. Interesting, very interesting. I am slightly worried about the council but I am more intrigued about what Naruto is after. He can always avoid the councils, hunter nins I suppose. Thanks for updating!!! I want to see more of the new Naruto and more interaction between Sasuke and this new character. Gambatte!!!
Ja matta!
Ja matta!
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November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice work, I like that fact that you are taking the time to write and actual story witht a real plot and character development. We don't get that here much. I have enjoyed reading this, good job.
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November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wooohooo....I'm really like how this fic is coming out. Can't wait to know what happens. I really hope Naruto didn't really betray Konoha and that Sasuke will bring his sorry ass back home. I also really like your Sai here. He one of the few characters that I love and should deserve more attention to, not to mentiont hat he's hot as hell. ;) Thanks so much for sharing this fic. Looking forward in reading more.....Keep up the great work! :D
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October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH NO! Don't stop now....I need more, more, MORE!
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September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My only problem with this story is the chapters are too short! damn it. other than that I am so loving this story, so please update soon.
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September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What?! You finally update, and leave it right there?! Update asap!
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September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ack! The suspense! I really, really can't wait for more. Your dialouge and pacing is perfect.
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September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow what a great chapter!! The plot.... she thickens!!! >:)
Hmm... theories, theories... I could guess either Naruto is trying to split from the Kyuubi or he's trying to work out some deal to undo the sacrifice of the fourth and bring him back. Although I'm probably way off. Sound the horns... its fox hunting season in Konoha!
Again, another great chapter. I look forward to your next one! ^^ Keep up the good work.
Hmm... theories, theories... I could guess either Naruto is trying to split from the Kyuubi or he's trying to work out some deal to undo the sacrifice of the fourth and bring him back. Although I'm probably way off. Sound the horns... its fox hunting season in Konoha!
Again, another great chapter. I look forward to your next one! ^^ Keep up the good work.