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for I'm only Human

by VRon8899

schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok definitely want sasunaru! like both kiba/hinata or neji/hinata. are you bringing in the sand trio? don't think so. what about a threesome kiba/neji/hinata?
doubt it though

now what was meant about what akirs meant? if i'm right akira was naruto. eyes covered to hide his eyes (slitted and red) and was able to 'smell' and act as blind due to possible merging with kyubbi? or did you mean something else.

an_dragonclawz@bellsouth.net
person Ukagau
schedule July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
^_^ I am going to take a gander at your challenge, but it has been all summer since I have studied my Japanese. (Lazy bum!) Akira (When going by the dictionary and stem version) means to become clear, to accept. Seiko (pm me for the kanji I have) was worldly affairs XD OMG! So maybe to accept the world? It can also mean bright intelligent and sincere boy.._O_

Oh my, I should have just said, "I think this..." However, it is okay. I enjoyed the chapter. Sakura is a little scary when angry and Sasuke seems a little weak, but maybe that is just because Naruto has memorized so many forbidden Jutsus! My name is actually a verb that means to watch, observe, to see. More or less that what it is. Now I feel as if I have told too much O_o *Bring out the Ramue gun!*

Anyways, great story hun and keep up the good work.
schedule July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Since Akira Seiko roughly translates out to Intelligent Truth, perhaps you could argue that if Akria Seiko is actually Naruto in disguise, its a code name for the hidden intellegence of his true, unhidden self. (Since, you know, Naruto wears the mask of a fool.) An identity like that would be a mocking to his former nakama, since it would flaunt his vast knowledge of forbidden jitsu and his ability to outsmart and avoid those persuing him.

Or maybe I'm looking to far into this? 0:)

Excellent chapter, btw. ^^
person Vex
schedule July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! I'm so looking forward to this plot.
=3
person Angevin
schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yo, I love your story. I read every update that comes out. I want to try doing your little contest.
Akira: Intelligent
Seiko: Sincere child
person lo
schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice, I like what you are doing. I am really getting into this. I can't wait to see where you take this.
person Ukagau
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O_O I am so excited about this story! A running away Naruto has happened in quite a few stories but not one where he stole more scrolls and took an abundance of weaponry with him. Hmmmm, very interesting. What will Saukra say? I wonder if she is going to form a group and secretly leave, or just fume. Maybe investigate. I am looking forward to how this pans out in the end. Sasuke lose, and a suspicious acting Naruto. Good job! Now I have two of your stories to follow closely and others to read. Great job as usual.

Ukagau
person lonelylulaby
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, so Naruto had his departure all planed out. That sneaky snake. Anywho I liked this chappie can't wait till we see what other stuff Naruto has up his sleeve.

ja ne till next time and keep up the goos work
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. But now I'm curious as to why Naruto is doing this, or what Sakura is going to talk about at that meeting she called. This is getting good, I'll patiently await the next chapter!
person wildkit
schedule July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I need more!!!!