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June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aw, poor naru. yeah, you better hunt him down sasuke, and give hima good, uh, "talking to".
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June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story, please update again soon, I want to know what happens.
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June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
when are you updating?
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June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O.O you stop there
It was just getting interesting, lol.
Can't wait until your next chapter :)
It was just getting interesting, lol.
Can't wait until your next chapter :)
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June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OK seriously, you have got to hurry and update. Just this one measly little chapter has gotten me hooked. Yeah there are one or two typos and grammatical errors but not enough to turn me off like it usually would. Soooo please update soon and keep up the good work.
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June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooo me likes this one *claps all excitingly* I really want to read on and see how you will continue this story *nods*, great start sofar.
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June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooooh!!! This is gonna be sooooo much fun!!!!
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June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good start! Can't wait to read more!
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June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The beginning looks very interesting! Can't wait to see where you take this!
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June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked the part at the end when you said he disappeared in curling black smoke. I really don't have any suggestions cause the story is just getting started and once you add more I'll be sure to have more imput; but until then I like what you have so far.
ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
ja ne till next time and keep up the good work