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December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very exciting~! Can't wait for more.
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December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Outstanding action piece~! Still don't know the advantage of Naruto's split though...
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December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh please please update I couln't stop reading and now I'm hooked you have to finish
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December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NYUUUUUU~~~!!!!!! It's taken be a bit to get to this part. But I am here now. I wait until I'm at the end of as far as it goes before I review. I actually enjoy how it has unfolded. Very nice. The plot is intricate but not over done. It's believable. I'm more than excited as I wait for what I'm hoping to be a conclusion here very soon. And this is one story that I won't mind that it's Sasuke and Naruto together. ^^ I give it two thumbs up. *holds thumbs up*
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December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lol.. I agree. I it would be fun to collaborate on something. ^^
Also, Itachi vs the nine tails!! =^^= What fun the next chapter will be! Now that Naruto's not only back to himself but knows the Sasuke-related incentive that awaits him if he survives... hopefully he won't be so death wish happy when the time comes. :D
Keep up the good work!
Also, Itachi vs the nine tails!! =^^= What fun the next chapter will be! Now that Naruto's not only back to himself but knows the Sasuke-related incentive that awaits him if he survives... hopefully he won't be so death wish happy when the time comes. :D
Keep up the good work!
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December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think that part of the reason why you're not getting many reviews is because people are starting to get tired of scrolling left to right to read you story.
What I would do is go through this story and your others, and make sure that you don't have more that 72 characters across your page. If you make a long line of __________________, that makes the reader have to scroll across. Even with the change you made to the underlining, when you put the story into wordpad or MS word (Which is what I have to do in order to even read this story) it works out to about THREE lines of _____ at times.
I'm not trying to be mean or anything because even though I'm confused, I'm enjoying it, but I think you would increase your reviews and greatly increase this story's readability by fixing that horizontal scroll.
Just use a simple divider like ~*~ or something that is small.
What I would do is go through this story and your others, and make sure that you don't have more that 72 characters across your page. If you make a long line of __________________, that makes the reader have to scroll across. Even with the change you made to the underlining, when you put the story into wordpad or MS word (Which is what I have to do in order to even read this story) it works out to about THREE lines of _____ at times.
I'm not trying to be mean or anything because even though I'm confused, I'm enjoying it, but I think you would increase your reviews and greatly increase this story's readability by fixing that horizontal scroll.
Just use a simple divider like ~*~ or something that is small.
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November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed the chapter. You have me sitting on the edge of my chair :) I can't wait till I know what will happen next and how it will end.
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November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loving the story! Excellent rendering of how characters would act/react, especially the complicated personality of Sai. I can't wait to see how this story turns out!
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November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap!! O_O This chapter is like just one huge set up for something crazy. I'm almost hesitant to look forward to the next chapter, lest my mind be blown by sheer ninja-heavy insanity!!
lol =^^=
Keep up the good work! If you find someone willing to flesh this thing out manga-style be sure to post the link. There's enough action in this to make it a worth while doujinshi. hehehe
Until next time~! :D
lol =^^=
Keep up the good work! If you find someone willing to flesh this thing out manga-style be sure to post the link. There's enough action in this to make it a worth while doujinshi. hehehe
Until next time~! :D
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November 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
they are most definately going to be needing that hospital; so i figured i should contribute. So, yeah, i'm a tad confused; is itachi a good guy or a bad guy? also, what happened to seiko(?) ((I forgot the clone's name. haha)) Will he be okay? I hope they save Naruto; i don't want him to merge with Kyuubi. Or die. (love how i put that second. >.<) Please update as soon as you can!! :heart: