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November 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(I am lazy so this is the same review I left on Y, I am so happy for the return of this story and this new chapter!!!!)
Madara is not exactly my favorite person and Zetsu is downright one of the creepiest beings in existence…what’s with him and eating people?
I feel bad for Naruto, even though he hasn’t lost his identity even at six tails he has still lost part of himself, his soul. Naruto isn’t Naruto without it, Seiko needs to get back to him and fast.
Hmm who is the girl? Someone who calls Jiraya sensei and who he now has to fight…Arghhh you are killing me with all these mysteries, I just want to read more and more and more (maybe that’s your whole point).
Everyone is involved in fights at the moment and I have my heart in my throat for all of them, I don’t want anyone of our nins and their allies getting hurt… Most of all I’m worrying about Naruto, if the scales don’t tip in his favor fast I don’t know how much of Naruto will be left after the fight even if he survives.
Thank you so much for an amazing chapter it was worth the wait…I can’t wait to read more though, you can’t keep leaving me hanging like this. Soon I won’t have any nerves left.
Again thank you so much!
Madara is not exactly my favorite person and Zetsu is downright one of the creepiest beings in existence…what’s with him and eating people?
I feel bad for Naruto, even though he hasn’t lost his identity even at six tails he has still lost part of himself, his soul. Naruto isn’t Naruto without it, Seiko needs to get back to him and fast.
Hmm who is the girl? Someone who calls Jiraya sensei and who he now has to fight…Arghhh you are killing me with all these mysteries, I just want to read more and more and more (maybe that’s your whole point).
Everyone is involved in fights at the moment and I have my heart in my throat for all of them, I don’t want anyone of our nins and their allies getting hurt… Most of all I’m worrying about Naruto, if the scales don’t tip in his favor fast I don’t know how much of Naruto will be left after the fight even if he survives.
Thank you so much for an amazing chapter it was worth the wait…I can’t wait to read more though, you can’t keep leaving me hanging like this. Soon I won’t have any nerves left.
Again thank you so much!
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October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay, this story is up again! :D I'm happy.
Man, I really hope Sasuke and co. get there on time to save Naruto! That idiot, going off like that to sacrifice himself. Bah. *smacks Naruto upside the head*
I also hope Itachi doesn't get to him first! :( Will Sasuke encounter his brother? I'm anxious to see what happens! And what's going to happen now that Seiko is dead? Is he really dead? How will that affect Naruto and the bond? Ahh please update soon!
Man, I really hope Sasuke and co. get there on time to save Naruto! That idiot, going off like that to sacrifice himself. Bah. *smacks Naruto upside the head*
I also hope Itachi doesn't get to him first! :( Will Sasuke encounter his brother? I'm anxious to see what happens! And what's going to happen now that Seiko is dead? Is he really dead? How will that affect Naruto and the bond? Ahh please update soon!
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October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Story is hidden? Why?? :( *pouts* But I want to read it... Can you fix this please???
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October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad to hear that you're on top of the problem! *Huggles for support* Keep trucking along, and I'll be here to check up on it whenever you update! :D I love this story! (ps, you can email me if you want, or I have YIM - setoassassinplushie_tm@yahoo.ca ) Good luck!
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September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading your two new chapters. I can feel that everything is coming to a head. I feel that things will be happening soon. I'm really excited. I can't wait.
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September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh, nice fight scene. Kisame is a bastard in this but I guess its for a good reason. SO they know about Madara, grr I hate him oh so much...Anyhow I sure hope to read more soon. ^_^ Have some cookies! *hands you a plate of chocolate chip cookies*
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September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dear sweetie, what are you doing to my mental health? Juast when I thought that I had started to recover you spring this on me.... Don't get me wrong though, I absolutely love every single word I read. I just get frustrated that no one ever gets to Naruto...
And what is this about Seiko.....? Seiko can't die now, his Naruto's soul, he needs to find Naruto and merger so that Naru can push Kyuubi back. I'm so emotionally invested in this story that I actually get out of breath when the characters are running...Is that good or bad hmm?
Thank you for a wonderful chapter! I loved the arrival of Jiraya at the end...Just don't let him end up like in the manga. Again thank you and I'm already looking forward to the next chapter! Now I'm going to calm down and grab myself a soda...You always get my adrenaline pumping with your chapters...
And what is this about Seiko.....? Seiko can't die now, his Naruto's soul, he needs to find Naruto and merger so that Naru can push Kyuubi back. I'm so emotionally invested in this story that I actually get out of breath when the characters are running...Is that good or bad hmm?
Thank you for a wonderful chapter! I loved the arrival of Jiraya at the end...Just don't let him end up like in the manga. Again thank you and I'm already looking forward to the next chapter! Now I'm going to calm down and grab myself a soda...You always get my adrenaline pumping with your chapters...
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September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
These chapters are getting pretty crazy. Plus, and I must say I am impressed, you started this story how long ago was it? You seem to be incorporating the newest manga chapters into the story with ease. That's freaking awesome. ^^
Anyway, I'm glad you enjoy my reviews. I enjoy your chapters so I'd say its a fair trade. ;) heh.
Keep up the great work. ^^
Anyway, I'm glad you enjoy my reviews. I enjoy your chapters so I'd say its a fair trade. ;) heh.
Keep up the great work. ^^
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September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. I think that it is great how you can take them out of character but keep them in it at the same exact time. (I hope that made sense for you) Your writing style keeps me from getting bored and using the back button.
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September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooh! Cliffie, cliffie, cliffie! o.O! You naughty girl! That's a biggin' too. How are they gonna get out of it *whimpers*... 'o.o? *looks around at the others for answers* anybody? hello? -_- I gets no love. lol. Anyway, keep it up, the suspense is killing me! I'm hooked! *sticks a hook in her mouth* see? ow ._., I'm stuck... Help?