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for I'm only Human

by VRon8899

person lunajen
schedule August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm in love with this story!! I was soo excited when i saw that you had updated, seems like i've been waiting forever. I couldn't read fast enough to see what was going to happen. Please keep doing what you are doing it's amazing! Love it love it LOVE IT!
schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another chapter! *does happy dance* (Grifferin: *does happy dance*) (Slythindor: <.< Don't even think about it-ah!) *grabs him and makes him do the happy dance* See me and all my muses are excited. ^_^ Wonderful chapter again. I'm glad everything is slowly piecing together. I'm feeling the climatic vibe here. Suspenseful! *squeals* <--- (hasn't done that in a while). See what you made me do? Can't wait for the next one. Save Naruto, Sasuke!! Don't let fish face get in your way!
schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My review got cut off! Hmph. Does that mean I talk too much and AFF is trying to tell me something? Hmm. Oh well, hope you got it all, if not, I'll sum it up; LOVE IT! Absolutely can't wait for more. You got this thing w/making people be on the edge of their seat. And if you did get the other review, well you got double reviews from me ^_^ Good, ne?
person Sa-Chan
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Arghhh Sasuke didn't make it to Naru in this chapter either. Are you trying to purposly give me a heratattack here. Someone needs to help my little fox before he's killed and apparantly eaten...

As always this was a brilliant chapter and I can't wait to read more. Thank you so much for this update!
person Gwyllion
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh yay! An update! Thank you. I'm seriously dying to know what will happen once the others get to Naruto. Please don't let anything happen to him......much. It feels like a never ending chase....a very exciting and tense one that is. Keep it up! I look forward to your next one. :)
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe... excellent chapter. This fic is starting to get pretty battle heavy. (Battle heavy with awesomeness!!) ^^

Keep up the great work.
person nyge98
schedule August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was really good. You'r slowly revealing a little more about what is going on. Like I said before I'm still on my toes in suspense. I can't wait till the next chapter.
person daisheen
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this story is pretty good, i was wondering what made come up with the idea of soul-spilting, it gives a different feel for naruto and the action pretty good and intense, hope you can finish this story as soon as possible.
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, I for one am enjoying this story immensely. I haven't read a Sasu/Naru fic at all but I like it. It feels like I'm almost watching episodes out of the show with how you portray the action and the reactions of the characters. My only quirk so far has been how short the chapters are, but I had alot to read all at once so that didn't bother me at all. I'm sorry to hear that your feedback has dwindled. Being an author myself who came to this website not long ago and hasn't gotten any feedback, I know how disconcerting it can be. You have so many hits so you wonder what are those people thinking when they read your story, right? And you're story seems to be popular. I wouldn't let it get me down. You're doing a great job! I myself am on the edge of my seat waiting for the moment when Naruto and Sasuke finally meet! ^_^ Can't wait!
schedule July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was awesome!! O_O So much going on in such a short chapter. You really know how to cram the action in there, don't you! (Plus: Naruto! Finally making an appearance! ^^)

Keep up the great work!