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June 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You definately still have me on my toes. I really don't know what will happen next and that is why I truly love this story. I can't wait till the next chapter.
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May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ACK! No...::groans:: There's no more chapters to clicky-click on. ::pouts:: I just finished reading all thirteen chapters, and I must say, very intriguing. There are times that I'm not sure if I follow what's going on - but then it's cleared up later. I am looking foward to seeing what the exact threat Naruto is trying to ward off. It should be interesting. And it will also be interesting to see which side you put Itachi on. You appear to be aware of the latest manga chapters at least. Should be good. :-)
Looking forward to the next update! Feel free to e-mail me at Jelp4@aol.com with the next update. ~ Jelp
Looking forward to the next update! Feel free to e-mail me at Jelp4@aol.com with the next update. ~ Jelp
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May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update on this story. I really like this one. It has a unique plot, and I hope Sasuke makes it in time. Thanks for writing and sharing this.
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May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What does Itachi and Kisame have planned (well more like Itachi)?
Will Sasuke and Seiko reach Naruto in time? All these questions, and more
answered in the chapter. LOL. I just had to do that. (victim of 80's tv)
Looking forward to the next chappie.......
(formerly spanish74)
Will Sasuke and Seiko reach Naruto in time? All these questions, and more
answered in the chapter. LOL. I just had to do that. (victim of 80's tv)
Looking forward to the next chappie.......
(formerly spanish74)
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May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please don't be discouraged because this is a really great story that i look forward to even though i don't always say so (i am tacky like that). i can't wait to see the next chapter because now i am starting to wonder if minato did in fact use that forbidden jitsu and the other him that is walking around is pein.
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May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A new chapter and I'm so happy, your updates always brightens my day!
This was a great chapter and I'm so exited to see wich side you're going to put Itachi on, it seems that he has something up his sleeve. It would be great if he were a good guy I like Itachi (almost as much as Gaara).
Hope that Sasuke catches up with Naru soon and maybe he can help him, I hate the idea of Naruchan in pain.
Thank you sooo much for this chapter, I'm still absolutely loving this story and it is a treat that you share your amazinf writing with us. Looking forward to the next chapter!
This was a great chapter and I'm so exited to see wich side you're going to put Itachi on, it seems that he has something up his sleeve. It would be great if he were a good guy I like Itachi (almost as much as Gaara).
Hope that Sasuke catches up with Naru soon and maybe he can help him, I hate the idea of Naruchan in pain.
Thank you sooo much for this chapter, I'm still absolutely loving this story and it is a treat that you share your amazinf writing with us. Looking forward to the next chapter!
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May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay!! updated!!!
ok so what's goin on with itachi
has he completely lost his marbles
or is he gonna try playing "nice brother"
i don't get what he meant :(
ok so what's goin on with itachi
has he completely lost his marbles
or is he gonna try playing "nice brother"
i don't get what he meant :(
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May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the main plot, it's mysterious, and makes you want to know more. And, it has many characters too... but with the right amount because they don't hog the spotlight. I'd like to see an OVA made of this. XD
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May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well i think it was an awesome chapter...but giiirl this is alot of freaking drama omg! its alot!
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May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story. It is keeping me on my toes trying to figure out what will happen next.