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for I'm only Human

by VRon8899

person airhead622
schedule May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay!! ur back!
and the new chapter was pretty much what i was
hoping 4
so... go u!!!

can't wait 4 the next one.
person demona
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo new chap. *does a happy dance* *cough*cough* *hopes no one saw that* *shifty eyes* o__O

I really enjoyed the new chap. Cant wait for more.
person mrk33
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You did not disappoint.
person Sa-Chan
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooh this chapter was amazing! As usual you simply blow me away I loved this chapter. Poor Gaara though I hope that he finds love. I can't wait to find out what's in store next. Will Sasuke catch up to Naruto and will the strain on Narutos body free Kyuubi?

Thank you for this chapter, you just keep drawing me in deeper and deeper with this story that has an amazing plot and is so very well written, looking forward to the next chapter...
schedule May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
....ok....its not a clone...he split his soul...that good to know....WHAT A IDEIT! This drama is killing me here. But I think that Minato did keep his promise to Jiraiya, just that Naruto got his stupided hands one what Minato already develioped of the skill, and adviced on it. That would be my guess. *sigh* this is getting realling complacted. That are some reporcousions to this jetsue, that no one knows yet, and if Sasuke dont get there soon, there maybe nothing there for him to save....Please update as soon as you can! Great Work! ^^
person airhead622
schedule April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay!! u updated!!!
but chapter seemed short :(

i can't wait till the next one though
^.^
person Suzieuchiha
schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah yay! Another lovely update! I really love this story, the history between Gaara and Naruto and now Sai's crush on Naruto fit perfectly! I just spotted that request for a beta reader on your last chapter and if you haven't already found anyone already then I'd be glad to do it! Email me and let me know okay?
schedule April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'd probably agree with Sai that Sasuke doesn't deserve Naruto... but the heart wants what the heart wants, eh? Kakashi was a bit cold about breaking Sai from any illusion he might have had about getting Naruto for himself. Can't wait to see what happens next chapter!!! (And was that a bit of an Itachi pov at the end? Killer!) hehe Keep up the good worK!
schedule April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
mah mah of corse i enjoyed this one it is very exciting and i'm actually keeping up with it. sai is a little jealous though lol poor guy oh well it seems like sasuke is the heart of problems :p i still haven't figured out what naruto is doing with the fourth's things... but i guess i leave that as a surprise to myself lol anyways thanks for the update!!! keeping an eye on this!
person Halskr
schedule April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update on this even though it was just a filler piece. I hope it works out for Naruto and his clone.