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April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
a cloun? He thinks a CLOUN can replase him! I know Naruto's an ideit but come on! Even he can be that stupid, can he? ..... *re-read chapter*...>.> I guess so. *sigh* Well please update soon. Someone needs to get there before to noke some since back into his head, even though apparently he never had any to begin with, if this was the best plan he could come up with. *grumble, sigh* Please update as soon as you can. I HAVE to know what happens next. Great Work! I love the chapter! ^^
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April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow... so Naruto actually split his soul? I love the fact that his own soul is working against him. Sasuke now knows and Akatsuki has caught on to something... can't wait to see how this all unfolds! ^^ (btw... I luv luv luv the NaruXGara implications! hehehe)
Keep up the good work!
Keep up the good work!
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April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the supense, and what will Sasuke do. He is livid, and will leave to locate his Dobe.
This chapter is moving the story along, and am I correct in saying that Gaara just wants a piece
of Naruto for himself well more-so, save a piece of his soul since the council had planned
to execute him anyway. This is better than the manga. Looking forward to the next chapter.
This chapter is moving the story along, and am I correct in saying that Gaara just wants a piece
of Naruto for himself well more-so, save a piece of his soul since the council had planned
to execute him anyway. This is better than the manga. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so excited for an update! can't wait for the next one!
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March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to find out what happens next! I love this story. I wonder what will happen when Sasuke and Kakashi catch up.
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March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh man. I missed this story. You do conspiracy and mystery so well! I really have no clue what's going to happen or where peoples' loyalties lie! It's wonderful. I'm truly addicted. Can't believe I haven't caught up with this one for so long. I was missing out!
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March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Still hooked, looking forward to the next chapter.
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March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*taping fingers on desk* Well I say you need to up date, REAL soon. This is going to kill me! What the hell is Naruto thinking. I understand his need to sacrurfic himself for his villge (the ungratfule fuckingers *glar at cancule, and villegers*)BUT this is NOT in need of the sacrufic! This could be handled with out losing his life! If he would just get his head out of his ass, and look around him, he would know this! *Glare at Naruto, wacking him in the back of the head* Please let "SOMEONE" get to him before he dose any PROMANIT mustsicks! I don't care who, jsut someone! *growl, and glar*
Anyways, great work! I am so looking fowered to the next chapter. UPdate as soon as you can! Fantsitc Work! ^__^
Anyways, great work! I am so looking fowered to the next chapter. UPdate as soon as you can! Fantsitc Work! ^__^
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March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah I don't like reading one-shots. I get bored and tend to skip over them when looking for something to read.
Mm but I like this and it's great. I can't wait to see where it goes.
Mm but I like this and it's great. I can't wait to see where it goes.
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March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update. I cant wait to see if my guesses are correct.