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for Hinata's Secrets

by inediblefrogs

schedule March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This sounds like a great outline for a series of stories!
person llyoung
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is written so wonderfully. The cadence is fantastic and love the way everything came full circle. Plus Hinata gets most of the hot men in Konoha.
person Kattmad
schedule November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well, well, well...little Hinata at least knows how to pick the boys who don't kiss and tell.
mmm...Neji...*drool*
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Shikyaku, <3

Poor Hinata. I can definitely identify with her. oo; Very nicely written. An interesting 'take' on things. You are so awesome. :)
schedule July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the way this is constructed. The rhythem of the piece is enough to suck you in and spit you out thinking "That's all?" when it stops but at the same time you realize that it's run full circle. Brava. Brava.
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! I wish I could write like that. The way you manage to capture Hinata's personality and the mood in such a short fic it truly amazing.
person ava
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
loved it!
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't say honestly that this is not an awesome fic.
I can't say honestly that the things shown in this fic are impossible for quiet little Hinata.
I can't say honestly that when I visualize, while reading this, when the very idea makes me wince and feel slightly outraged, that I don't, really enjoy it.

Heh, well done mate.
schedule June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I thought this was a very good short. Your cadence in the writing was very effective. Thanks for posting it!
schedule June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!
Its always the quiet ones that was the NASTY ones.