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for Forbidden: Love of Brothers

by FarawayDawn

person 1nuggetlol
schedule March 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really love the story line! I hope u keep it going and past soon!
person blisblop
schedule March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whoa.I bet they say they love each other more times in this one chapter then they do in the rest of the whole site.Truly and oddly shocking.
person Rukia
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay, a second chapter! It's really touching, I adore the the way you write... it's beautiful!
person oztan
schedule July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. I hope they stay toghter.
person Dragon7
schedule July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Grate chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
person Kytalise
schedule July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh this story is great! I'm really glad it's open for everyone to review. ^^

XD
person qwerty
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I thought this would be a one-shot but apparently not. Well-written. Where is this heading?
good job
person Kigen
schedule July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have to do it. Don't kill me.

Squeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!

Cuteness to the nth power. The major sappyness was much loved. You two better hurry up and write the net chapter. I wanna see more uke Sasuke and romantic Itachi.
person qwerty
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
interesting... is Naruto going to happen upon them when Sasuke is at Itachi's? That would be some heavy drama...
person Misa
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. It's beautifully written and haunting. I absolutely like it. And the idea of Sasuke being together with Naruto but having an affair with Itachi is interesting, too. You did a great job.