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for The Ramen Club

by MissMayumi

person Peggi
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i know far too much because i already read chapter 2 but figured i'd leave the review and a nice rating anyway! CRACK I TELL YOU! IT IS CRACK!
person Peggi
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
and i am hoping to have chapter 3 in my email soon! i will edit it poke-at-the-keys by poke-at-the-keys if i must, because this story is great! one night stand was great and i loved it sooo much but this one really has me HOOKED! this typing one handed thing sucks but i refuse to let your story go unreviewed by me! anyways i can't wait to read more of it and you're doing a really great job with it so far! hardly any errors at ALL with this one! yay!
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I really liked how you showed most of the characters being too scared to admit that they are gay, and I laughed so hard when Orochimaru caught Sasuke & Naruto in the closet :). PS just skittles is fine (they are the best food ever!!!)
person Rosebud
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!!! This chapter rocked my socks!!!
It was great!
LOL Sasuke and Naruto getting it on in the closet! Now that's what I'm talking about.
Hehe, I loved the interaction between Gaara and Neji too!
Keep up the awesome job and PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
what dont people understand u cant do that to me...u cant leave the story in the middle of a good part
person kati
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*snicker* bubblegum girl...is this sasunaru or narusasu? (SASUNARU PLEASE!!!!!) Update soon, I can't wait to read more!^^
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh busted! kinda wonder why gaara said to get sakura pregnant that's kinda weird but oh so smexy. Feel really bad for sakura since she's not getting any in this fic but screw her!
person blueh
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL! That was funny! I can just imagine the look on Naruto and Sasuke's faces. Haha. And I wonder what Gaara will do to Neji next. (^.~) I definitely like this chappie.

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schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoo! Another Great Chappie! Keep 'em comin'! Loved this one. I love the hot lemon at the end, hope more is to come!
person Anaheyla
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HA! This is good. I eagerly await you to continue.