rate_review Reviews

OMG! Great ending. I'm glad you made an after part to tell that they really were gonna stay friends! I really hope you make a sequel. Well hope. But great story all the way!

OMG! Awesome story love!!!
I wanted to cry at first, but Orochimaru's "What the hell is the ramen club?" line made me smile and Gaara's "A little to much PDA..." had me laughing. I do hope that you write more later on. And thank god Sasuke and Naruto were still friends. I would have cried if you broke them up.

Keep up the awesome work love! I look forward to reading more stories from you.

Very Nice! I really enjoyed reading this and the ending was just wonderful.

I hope to read more from you in the future.

Thanks again for writing this and sharing it.

-Akiru-

what? that was the ending? it's finished??? aahhh ok abrupt much?! i had no idea it was almost over. Erm this has to be my least favourite chapter: too short, too much taken up by that song and not enough warning you were taking it awaaaayyy!!

I wish the ending had been a little longer. Maybe skip to when they were adults and see how they turned out but nonetheless it was really good. Thank you such a great story I look forward to others stories from you.

lol - cute chapter, I really wanna see Naruto looking like a girl, I hope someone with some talent at art does some fan art for this :D

Yay! Finally an update! I'm glad to see Sakura taking part in it some how! I love that song! I so had to listen to it while I read! Hope another is to come soon! Great job!

hehehehe i sense more sasu 'blanking' naruto in the next chapter, if ya know wat i mean *wink wink* Can't wait, the 'scenes' lol are usually a bit short but still very hot.

I feel all special getting mentioned by name. This chapter was definitely a little more "on track". The whole Neji and Gaara in the closet was great, and the Naruto makeover was the perfect way to end the chapter.

Okay, let's see if i can give you some helpful suggestions. Five was fine as it was, it was just a little short. It still had the proper "feel" to it. You're heart didn't seem to be in chapter six, and it was reflected in the story (Which still didn't seem that bad to me.I wouldn't even have noticed if you hadn't told me at the start that you didn't like it.). It might have been better to have Sasuke and Naruto have sex without explaining that they were stoned(sometimes explaining things to much can take away from the story). Then during the truth and dare part have someone mention the fact that Naurto and Sasuke ran off together and have Sasuke and Naruto forget it happened. Then the whole deja vu thing will flow a bit more naturally.

And above all else remember to have fun with it! Writing is always easier when your are enjoying yourself and what you are doing.

OMG love! This chapter was awesome! Neji and Gaara were so hot! And Naru-chan got a make-over haha, I love that! Oh and then there was the dancing. I'm so glad that you had me watch TBC and I'm even happier that you wrote this story! I can't wait to read the last chapter! Keep it up and I hope that your BETA sends the next chapter back soon. XD