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for The Ramen Club

by MissMayumi

person Rosebud
schedule August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I LOVED this chapter! It was soooooo good! And yes, it was long enough for me! I loved the Sasuke/Naruto scene at the beginning! And then the reason's why they were there, that was just awesome! Keep it up girl and I can't wait to read more! XD
schedule August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting start... I've seen this story up but I never got around to reading it. I think that Naruto is really really really in character. I can so see him screaming that into Gaara's ear. Can't say that I'm a fan of the drug usage though... But I'm going to read on and decide then. But it's a great start and the set up for the rest of the story is really well done! (Hope to see more of Itachi in there though I don't like him on drugs srry... Itachi's my favorite character so I luvs him!)

-DA
schedule August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm... I like the pairings but I'm not sure where this is going? But then again I'm still only 4 chapters in. I really would like to see Gaara turn around and also it would be nice if there was more on Sakura - though she's not my favorite character.
schedule August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww come on! Update please???????
schedule August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mwhaha I did notice that! But they were all cute so I was like'heck yeah butt sex!' okay maybe i wasn't that excited but I was feeling....and...I share your love for C-2006...I'm an addicted to Lost!! Like crack head on the corner wanting another fix type addicted! -shives- good stuff man...goooooodddd stuff! But...no where did Sasu-chan and Naru-kun run off to I wonder...higher than a UFO they couldn't have gone far right?! Update with a states report cap'n -saults- good chapter!
person Jelp
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm, I almost hope they get caught. Stupid boys doing stupid drugs. I don't want Naruto and Sasuke to fool around when they're high - they won't remember it! lol Maybe they will get caught and have to do another detention together? Update again soon! ~ Jelp
person Sugary
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
THIS STORY IS GREAT!!! I really hope you continue. Orochimaru and Gaara make me laugh so hard. Gaara in this story is amazing. I love it.
person Rosebud
schedule August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG -GLOMPS- I luff you too Sweetheart!!!!!! You're the best, you know that! ^^
I feel so honored that you'd dedicated this chapter to me! I’m seriously going to have to get the next chapter of TTTBU out just for YOU!!!
This chapter was awesome! So did Naruto and Sasuke run off to go have sex again??? I hope so! Hehe! ^^
And yay, Neji is warming up to Gaara?
Hum, Orochimaru… I wonder what he’s up to???? It’s awfully suspicious that he didn’t show up in this chapter! Oohh, I can’t wait to read the next one!

Update soon! Please!!!! *glomps*
I luff you!!!!!
schedule August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nya! That was short. >.< Oh and the author family thing, I never thought about it before but when I read that I thought that I would be a distant cousin twice removed who nobody knew about until she appeared.... I should really finish my story... stories. >.>
Ja ne.
person digiditz
schedule August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww... such a short chapter. Oh well, just keep going and you will make me happy.