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August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL that was messed up with the toilet paper and the table scene. I love The Breakfast Club this story is so similar yet different. I really like how you have it going. Will there be more scenes to show the relationships developing? Does Sasuke know he took Naruto's virginity? Will Sasuke be the one with the harmonica and shades and are you going to do the scene when they all talk? Um is Naruto playing the role of that weird brunette girl? I can't wait for the update!
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August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! This one rocked! You rock! Even some good scenes in it too! You. Are. Good! *gets down to the floor and bows down* Not worthy!
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August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
agh!!! I hate cliffys but very cool anyway.
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August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hooray - another great chapter. I feel a little sorry for Sakura though. I like how you've made her helpful to Sasuke and Naruto, but the poor girl gets stuck in detention while the four boys get to run off and have sex, that's a little unfair, especially seeing as she's so nice. Aside from that, I love the deviations from the original :)
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August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am loving it! *gives you a cookie* smexy ness!!!! Keep it coming! ^.^
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August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
its not that i didnt like the last chapter oh by the way i love this one..it is just that i dont like when people leave it at a good part like you just did....but i do like this chapter, let me know when u write the next part
i love gaara/neji its hottttttt!!!!!!!!holy damn but yeah bathroom blowjob is hot...so is sas-UKE or seme...lol
i love gaara/neji its hottttttt!!!!!!!!holy damn but yeah bathroom blowjob is hot...so is sas-UKE or seme...lol
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August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oddly enough, I'm kinda sad Sakura doesn't get any lovin'...strange I would care about her. Still, go Naruto go...feel the love...go with the vibe! Omg, be gentle Sasuke-kun!!! I really like the idea, Breakfast club has to be on my list for top faves! Hmmmm I wonder...are you gotta bust out with a dance sence too? that was classic!
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August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ehh?? Why stop there? It was getting so.. steamy. Haha. And O.O Neji jumped on Gaara? I thought Gaara would be the one jumping. Oh well, it doesn't matter! Hehe. ^^,
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August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Seems like they'd want their first time to be a little more special than the boys room at school...especially since their first kiss (Naruto's first kiss altogether) was just a couple of hours before...
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August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!! update soon please!!!^-^