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for The Ramen Club

by MissMayumi

schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gah, you end right before all the good stuff. LOL. I love the conviently((sp?)) placed lotion. No doubt it was placed there for less than holy reasons. XD

Anywho, great chapter. I look forward to the next. Update soon please.

-Akiru-
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was Awesome! Fast update too, The lemon was just the right amount! Hope to see another update soon! ^_^ Also I just had to DL the song 'We are not alone' it's in the movie...Love it! Song fic. Too bad we can't post the song and listen to it while we read, Be tight! But I eagerly await the next Chappie!
person Jelp
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
^_^ Man...hopefully they don't get caught in that position! It might scar Naruto and Sasuke for life. And Gaara and Neji going at it, lol! Poor Sakura might be the only one left not getting any by the end of it. Keep up the good work. ~ Jelp
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oHHH GAARA AND NEJI!!!!!!! they would have smexy babies lol it's possible in fanfic!! >_< i have to admit i've never actually watched all of "breakfast club" i know the basis but i think this version is much better.
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woah! totaly hot! *snikers* i can't wait till you update!
person Anon
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi, you were asking where does my name come from, right? I don't remember exactly where I found it, but it literally means "destruction"; Hakai was some sort of female death's demon that kicked loads and loads of asses, and I instantly fell in love with her.^_^ i decided to steal her name 'cause Hakai totally rocks!^o^

your fic is going on pretty well, and don't worry, I don't need your warning when you update your fic: i have my five-six fic I often control very carefully for updates, so I won't miss yours. just one thing. if you come to review my story, could you at least tell me what do you think about it, beside your updates' warnings? I would love to hear your opinion, I'm just a 'work in progress' dilettante(amateur? mah! my english really sucks!)... you bothered to read, to review... just take a step more, no? ^.^ ;D

waiting very eagerly for the next chapter, byyyyyye, and congratulations again.

Hak.
person gaara89
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesomeness!! Please continue soon!
person Rosebud
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GO NEJI!!!!!Hehe, I'm glad he finally came out said he was GAY! And he kissed Gaara!!!!
And HELL YA, Now Sasuke and Naruto are getting it on in the bathroom, those horney boys!
I wonder what Orochimaru is going to say when he finds out.... -LOL-
I can't wait!XD

Oh, and I'll be updating my stories soon, sorry it's taking so long. I got to go over the chapter, send it to my BETA and as soon as I get it back, I'll post! Thanks for reminding me! :)
person vegaqixi
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAYYYY! Now for chapter 4!!! Great work!
person vegaqixi
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hot, hot, hot!!!! More plz!