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July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More crack! And you know, we make an awsome team ^-^ It just gets better and better, and I suspect I shall have chapter 4 in my hands soon as well :D I can't help but be amused with the little fact that even with chapter summaries I still look forward to new chapters. I am looking forward to the next chapter...because I KNOW stuff XD
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July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes I loved it more please!
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July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh....that.....was hot.....damn...."Damnit…I can’t stand Sakura, she’ll probably stalk me the rest of the day." Lmo!! DIE SAKURA DIIIEE!!hahah although she isn't that bad in this fic....MORE SASUNARU MOORREE!!!! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER LOVE!♥
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July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hahaha uh oh. *snickers* please update soon!
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July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
There are a few problems with your story. First of all, your parody of The Breakfast Club is based on an American high school system, but you stated that your story is set in Japan. The systems are completely different. There is no detention. There is no collective detention. There is also no such thing as Saturday school. Some schools do still have school on Saturday, meaning regular lessons but most schools don't and the only students on campus are there for sports and club activities.
Japanese laws also come down really hard on any type of narcotics. There's no way the principal would have lied to Sakura's parents.
Also, Japan doesn't have the same set of stereotypes as we do. Japanese students have to test into their high school meaning high level students are all at the same school and low level students are all together. You wouldn't have a student like Gaara at the same school as someone like Sasuke. You're also missing the details of a Japanese school, but that's less important. Another detail- Japanese kids can't drive. You have to be 18 to get your license in Japan. I know it's fanfiction, but details are important. ;) Don't underestimate research.
Japanese laws also come down really hard on any type of narcotics. There's no way the principal would have lied to Sakura's parents.
Also, Japan doesn't have the same set of stereotypes as we do. Japanese students have to test into their high school meaning high level students are all at the same school and low level students are all together. You wouldn't have a student like Gaara at the same school as someone like Sasuke. You're also missing the details of a Japanese school, but that's less important. Another detail- Japanese kids can't drive. You have to be 18 to get your license in Japan. I know it's fanfiction, but details are important. ;) Don't underestimate research.
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July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
totaly hot! can't wayt till the next chapie! I actualy like sakura this time! and I totaly LOVE Garras atitude! And way to go Naruto!
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July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL, I haven't seen the Breakfast Club in ages... I think the last time was my junior year of HS when I skipped with a friend... but you don't need to know that. XD
This fic rocks, I love it. Everyone seems very in character and it pretty much cracks me up all around.
Keep it up.
-Akiru-
This fic rocks, I love it. Everyone seems very in character and it pretty much cracks me up all around.
Keep it up.
-Akiru-
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July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this story is really funny in it's own little way. Can't wait for the next chapter ^.^
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July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
^.^ OMG that was awesome. sasuke and naruto making out in a closet, classic
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July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww! I really hope Orochimaru doesn't mess things up for Sasuke and Naruto. It'd be funny if they all had to do a Saturday dention the following week, and instead of Orochimaru, Kakashi was there encouraging them to be perverts or something. lol Another good chapter. :-) ~ Jelp