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I loved it now Sakuras a dish bitch!

Definitely enjoyed your fic! Keep writing because i can't wait to read more!!!

SASUKE YOU JERK!!!! ahem, sorry about that. geez, sasu, are you just plain stupid! there i go again. i'm really sorry. love this chapter and poor naru. how are you goign to make it up to him? LOL!

Vivi: I said you'd get a make up review because we kept gettin' cut off, right?

Venny: Today is your lucky day, babe. You get three reviews in one!

-Chap 4-

Venny: Okay, I STILL wanna hump Sai, and kill Sakura.

Vivi: Hey, still hate the pink haired slut.

Venny: Two hours? I sorry, I don't even think it takes that long for Vivi to get dressed, and she goes through her whole fucking closet, and back again. JUst for her to choose the outfit she had on before!

Vivi: Shut the hell up, you cock sucker. Oh, and 'mysteriously killed' my ass! You KNOW Fugaku had that woman murdered, and paid the police to keep their mouth shut.

Venny:...Paranoid~! lol, trust Sasuke to thinking about how to UNdress Naruto, while Naruto's still trying to figure out what to wear.

-Chap. 5-

Vivi: Wow, now I hate Sakura AND Fuguka.

Venny: lol, I <3 your Kibas so much, they make me smile.

Vivi: Aw, I feel bad for Suigetsu! He almost hurt himself while he was trying think. XDDDD

Venny: YESSSSS~! Gay Itachi, is the best KIND of Itachi~! ^___^

Vivi: As if they would all actually quit. And that was cold how Fuguka got Sasuke to talk about gay people, and how they make him feel.....Man, if that I was me. I would have said 'Gay men make me feel all hot, and bothered. IN FACT! I just got done having sex with my MALE secretary!' Or somethin along those lines to piss everyone off.

Venny: Okay. So Sasuke; a gay, or bi man thinks its getting to girly around his mansion. With Ino; a female, Sai; a gay male, and Sakura; a it that claims to be female. So he asks Suigetsu; a gay male, Kiba; a gay male, and Naruto; a EXTREMELY gay male to come and spend a night with him. I'm still trying to figure out how in the HELL he came up with that idea. X3

-Chap 6-

Vivi: BATH ROOM SEX SCENE!!!! YAY~!

Venny: Sasuke is a damnbass. I ain't even kiddin' you. If I could find me a dude like your Naruto, I would be the happiest bitch in the world. I would flaunt our relationship around like crazy.

Vivi: Kiba, and Suigetsu are really good friends. Better than Venny, his ass probably would have chosen the food.

Venny: Aw, you know that's not true, Vivi. You know I care abouts you.

Vivi: lol, I know. 'IOU....Oh wait, I don't. -Sasuke' Oh gawd, I laughed so hard. I could see myself doin that to one of my friends.

-End Reviews-

Vivi: Oh, gawd. my fingers are hurting like hell.

Venny: Same.

Vivi: I REALLY hope you like/appreciate this long as fuck review.

Venny: Actually, I'm starting to wonder how you can put up with us? I would have told Vivi to shut up a long time ago.

Vivi:....Cock whore.

Venny: And proud of it~!

Vivi: Your hopeless.

Venny: Hehe, I know. Buh-bye~!

~Vivi & Venny

P.S: We think you should either up date 'To Loved And Be Loved', or 'Mr. Right'

Awwwww, this story is not low quality! I like where it's leading to and I have been waiting for an update! Therefore, I jumped with joy when I saw there was one! Poor Naruto...Sasuke has some major sucking up to do if he even wants to think about being with his Naru-chan! And he better do it fast! Hahaha! Thank you for the awesome update! Keep up the good work!

I'm liking this keep it going, up-date

Squee! That was awesome, as usual. I heart Sai soooo much.

Also, I just blanked on everything I was going to comment on. Haha, go me!

And your sexuality crisis, I went through all that last winter. I even dated a girl for about a month, but it didn't really come to anything. We had a mutual breakup. It was kind of a really ridiculuous relationship anyway. We didn't even kiss.

My first kiss was a girl, though. But amusingly, this was after I had my bi-curiosity.

I know for a fact I'm straight now. Nothing turns me on like a pretty face and a flat chest. Mmmm Asian bishies....

Huh. I know a whole lot of guys that would look good in a dress. or a skirt. Especially that one freshman with the long ponytail...he's cute.

Kya! I LOVE YOU AND YOUR WRITING DARLING! And I'm sorry I haven't been on recently, but I've been sick, and swamped with schoolwork and preoccupied with reading Death Note. I'll try to be on more often from now on.

~Lihrah

You better update or I'm coming after you with a butcher knife.

Love ya!

Vivi: The SasuNaru lurv~!

Venny: Gawd, I HATE Sakura.....But I LOVE Sai~! is sexiness...Lack of knowledge about people aside. I LIKE playing teacher. ^.~ *winkwink,nudgenudge*

Vivi: Wow, in the same store, right next to each other....Amazing. XD

Venny: Really. I <3 Sai. If you put me in your story, and let me have kinky man sex with him; I'll love you more than I do already.

Vivi: You can be as affectionate as you want with us, hun. I'm bi-curios, and Venny's bi and proud. So let the hugs, kisses and such snuff fly!

Venny: ........Seriously. If you only just put me in there to hump his leg or something.

Vivi: *sprays Venny with water bottle* Bad, Venny. Down boy.

Venny: *sticks out tongue* Your just jealous because I don't randomly hump your leg anymore.

Vivi: .....Quiet you.

Venny: We gotta go, hun. Before this turns out into something that might endanger the laptop. BUH-BYE, SEXY~!

~Vivi & Venny

Vivi: O.O oh hell naw! That hoe cut off our long ass review!!

Venny: Duck no. ...Gawd, your lucky I <3 you & your stories so much, or I would have just said screw it, and went to sleep.

Vivi: I loved it. Funny, witty. Beautiful, chicklet.

Venny: I hate Sakura. Love Sai, despite his lack of knowledge about normal snuff. I LIKE being the teacher anyways. -wink,wink, nudge,nudge-

Vivi: Gawd, why can't Sakura just go crawl back from the ole in the wall she came from, the effin' roach?

Venny: If you put me in your story, and have me and Sai have kinky man sex; I'll love you more than I already do.

Vivi: -stares at Venny- ......

Venny: Seriously. At lest let me dry hump him.

Vivi:....

Venny: Hump his leg, something! 'm desperate~! TT.TT 'm sex deprived right now. So please sex the Venny.

Vivi:.....Gawd, Venny. Just go back to sleep.

Venny: -gives kiss on Zee_Kay's cheek- 'night. -falls asleep, snoring-

Vivi: 'Night, Zee-Kay.

~Vivi & Venny

P.S: Remember to update soon, chicklet~!

Okay, fuck no. Sorry Zee_Kay. But this damn thing keeps cutting me and Venny off. Venny got pissed, and actually left to go to sleep. We'll send another review later. But right now we're too tired to be witty, and snuff.

Expect a make-up review from us soon.

Ja,

~Vivi