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by ringpop

schedule September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love this story! i didint recognize it at first since the summary changed but i think naruto is so cute! >_< keep up the good work!
person Aleasha
schedule September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very cute love love love it
happy how you made sai sakuras gay little helper friend
its cute :)
schedule September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awe!!! come on girl hurry up and update! I want more! hehe ja!
schedule September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Didd snyone ever tell you how evil you are? ARG!!! Cliffhanger of doom! Wonderful Story so far, I look forward to the next chapter. Ja ne.
person beautifullove348
schedule September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Too bad the chapter was short :( But it was still good! I'm glad that Sasuke and Naruto are getting together :) Please update soon :)
person Anon
schedule September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope it's not the annoying bitch, Sakura. Hurry with the next chapter!!
person Vivi & Venny
schedule August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Vivi:.....I didn't belive you when you said it was short. Still don't; its just not as long as your others. Still long though.

Venny: You got the idea from us? O.O Sweet.

Vivi: Yea, their two of us. Why do we reveiw at the same time? Because.

Venny: Really, I would NOT want to be her split personality. I get freaked out by what she says when I ask her what's on her mind. Shit, I would probly go insane if I had to be in her head 24/7.

Vivi:....You are so lucky that you're sexy, or I would have stopped being friends with you long ago.

Venny: Ah, you know you love me, and my insanly sexy body!!

Vivi: Yesh, yesh I do. Now shut up. I know the PERFECT place for Sasuke, and Naruto to have their first time. At the restraunt, in the rest room. Agianst the wall.

Venny: Yep. That would be hott......I think I lost my virginity in a bathroom. O.O I wonder why.

Vivi: Because you're a whore. Now. Have ya thought about the KyuubiXItachi pairing? XD I still say its sexy; almost as good as SasuNaru

Venny:....Oh. I swing both ways, but I'll become completly straight if you update soon!!

Vivi:....That's a effin' lie.

Venny:....Yea. It would be a crime to deny anyone this body because of their sex. Eh. Nevermind them.

Vivi: -sigh- Well, .....are you going to say it or not?

Venny: Ah. LATER!

~Vivi & Venny
person celticfx
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love it! can't wait for your next update. (:
person S_R
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Squeals* I love it!! Sasuke and Naruto are hot. They're totally made for each other. It's just too bad Sakura and his father are in the way. Actually I wouldn't be surprised if Sakura turns out to be sleeping with his dad.

Please update soon ^^
person eowyncat
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dude, I was totally feeling crappy until I read your story. I always love your work - you are amazing and hilarious. Thank you so much (please keep it up)!