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liked the story, just one complaint

started out with Sasori as Gaara's cousin and Deidara as Naruto's uncle, but changed in the middle so Sasori was the uncle and Deidara the cousin. Kinda confusing.

hey, I just started reading your stories and cant wait to get to the rest! I already have an offer from another chika at FF.net, but can I have you both? But I still have to write more chappies and see if you guys like em enough to help me out. I dont even know how a beta works. Do I send you a finished chappy and you just correct grammar or do you help me with the plot and stuff?
Thank you for the review, hopefully I could get around to more writing soon...
Andy

read it again (chapter 13). Still FUNNY AS HELL !!!!
DARKON

this chapter was the funniest thing i read in ages good work

that last prank was sick bethula scared me...bad. but i thought the rest was HILARIOUS i can't wait for any other stories your gunna write. see ya.

I just finished reading chapter 13 and HAD to review. I FOFLMAO !!!! Meerkats running amuck in Itachi's room ! I loved it !! I LMOA at Itachi chasing them all over his room. But what had me howling was the baby meerkat in his pants. especially when it took a bite out of his dick.
I must say, the boys' vengence was pretty nasty. I mean the clay statues of a naked Gai Deidora's room was WRONG. Especially the one of Gai and Sasori doing it doggy style. NASTY!!!
Naruto,Shikamaru,Kiba,Menma,Sasuke,Shino,Gaara,and Neji were EVIL!!!
Keep up the good work.
DARKON






































gai and S

Lol, this was a really good story! Funny as hell!

very cool story.
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Nicely done.

Nice chapter. I'm glad that chapter wasn't the last one. Your little scenes in the very beginning are getting funnier.
update!