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May 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi,I checked the story out of curiosity, and I'm glad that I did. This story is awesome! I read your warning of no ukefied!Naruto and for a moment I imagined Naruto being as manly as Gai in school uniform :O I love how you describe Naruto and the gang's outings as well as Bro!Haku and Bro!Itachi : Sasuke seemed so tactless and insecure in this, but then your description of Fugaku made me understand of Sasuke's action more. Having this Fugaku as your father's really scary...
Anyway, are you going to continue this story? Because if not you might convert me to ship KimiSasu.
Thanks for writing.
Anyway, are you going to continue this story? Because if not you might convert me to ship KimiSasu.
Thanks for writing.
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November 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi. Just wondering when you're going to update? I like your story and can't wait to find out how Sasuke deals with finding out that Haku is actually male. Also I think you hinted that Haku was nervous about a relapse. Can you explore his history a bit more? If you want to email me it's r.s.taylor@hotmail.co.uk
Thanks! x
Thanks! x
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October 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I knew your author's name wasn't new to me but couldn't remember if I had read something from you before...and then I found THIS story, the one that kept me glued on it for months, wondering how it could continue, the one that drove me crazy when I accidentally lost the file and searched everywhere to get it back. You also wrote this? *_* (and the ones on team7? Turns out I've read most of your works afteraal O.o)Your way of writing is amazing! No matter how much time it takes, I really hope for an update in this story(really, how dense is Sasuke not to notice Haku-is-a-boy clues on others' faces? XD) Congratulations again!
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September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW! This is an amaaaazing story. I absolutely love how you write and how you develop the plot and characters. Its fantabulous!! I wonder how Sasuke is gonna find out about Haku and Naruto and how's he gonna react!? I really hope you'll be able to write more soon, since this reallyyy left me on the edge of my seat- for real ^-^
awesome awesome job!!!
~drawingwind
awesome awesome job!!!
~drawingwind
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May 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hi,
it's great to see a story which deals with real-world transgender issues, and is sympathetic to ambiguities of genderqueer life that are completely erased by all those fics i've seen here, where the boys can turn themselves into perfectly passing, ridiculously feminine and sexualised women whenever they feel the need. as interesting as it is that so many people seem to be dreaming about gender difference, i'm disturbed at how they reinforce binaries by stealth, not to mention making me long for very silly, over the top choices.
and even better, your work is also well written, engaging and a pleasure to read!
i wish you much success, however you're measuring it, and wait for the next chapter so i can hopefully find out whether naruto manages to negotiate a relationship despite his secrets, if any of the girls actually turn out to have brains and stories, whether sasuke can be honest with his mother...
thanks,
kate
it's great to see a story which deals with real-world transgender issues, and is sympathetic to ambiguities of genderqueer life that are completely erased by all those fics i've seen here, where the boys can turn themselves into perfectly passing, ridiculously feminine and sexualised women whenever they feel the need. as interesting as it is that so many people seem to be dreaming about gender difference, i'm disturbed at how they reinforce binaries by stealth, not to mention making me long for very silly, over the top choices.
and even better, your work is also well written, engaging and a pleasure to read!
i wish you much success, however you're measuring it, and wait for the next chapter so i can hopefully find out whether naruto manages to negotiate a relationship despite his secrets, if any of the girls actually turn out to have brains and stories, whether sasuke can be honest with his mother...
thanks,
kate
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April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aaaaahhh! I don't know if you are still writing these wonderful stories, but PLEASE continue them! At first I thought, if Naruto's a girl, I will not like this... but I have come to really enjoy this story. You have written the characters very well. It's like 3am and I'm sleepy, but I had to let you know how much I like your stories. So please, keep up the awesomeness!
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January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You are killing me with the kimimaru and Sasuke action. I must be a masochist because I shouldn't be reading this or at least those parts. Although, I just skim them but I still get cramps an not the good kind. Right now, my stomach is doing crazy, painful, anguish filled somersaults. You did say that this is a Sasuke/Naruto pairing, right? Please, put me out of my misery! I beg you! I feel like I'm being tortured, slowly but surely.
My email is marqqui @ yahoo . com
Please be an angel assure me that this phase would be over soon and that Sasuke/Naruto pairing will prevail! I really need your confirmation even if I read it already. Is just that Sasuke looks too into Kimimaru and they are doing all kind of things and is really driving me nuts! Seriously, drop me some lines to let me know, okay? I kind of see the minor attraction that Sasuke has for Naruto but he just melts when Kimimaru is near or touches him that it looks so disparing. So please, write me and if you have a emailing list, add me.
Thanks for now!
Sincerely
Moonmoore
My email is marqqui @ yahoo . com
Please be an angel assure me that this phase would be over soon and that Sasuke/Naruto pairing will prevail! I really need your confirmation even if I read it already. Is just that Sasuke looks too into Kimimaru and they are doing all kind of things and is really driving me nuts! Seriously, drop me some lines to let me know, okay? I kind of see the minor attraction that Sasuke has for Naruto but he just melts when Kimimaru is near or touches him that it looks so disparing. So please, write me and if you have a emailing list, add me.
Thanks for now!
Sincerely
Moonmoore
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November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't mean to push, and I know writers' black can suck if that's what's up, or real life, or whatever, but are you going to post another chapter? I'm really eager for it. I check this everyday and it's one of my homepage tabs so I don't have to keep pulling it up.
Yes, I'm an obsessive dork >_<
Yes, I'm an obsessive dork >_<
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November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like your story. Please continue. I don't write stories but I read a lot of them and I really don't review because I just like to read.
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November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really, really enjoyed this story. It is so different, so unique. I love Naruto and Sasuke's parallel internal debate with their identity. I really hope you intend on continuing it.
I wonder how Sasuke will react when he find out Haku isn't a girl- and oh! The possibilities for Naruto and Sasuke afterward! I am guessing Sasuke will assume Naruto, who he believes in a relationship with Haku, is gay. Will he start regarding him differently? Mhmmmm....
I wonder how Sasuke will react when he find out Haku isn't a girl- and oh! The possibilities for Naruto and Sasuke afterward! I am guessing Sasuke will assume Naruto, who he believes in a relationship with Haku, is gay. Will he start regarding him differently? Mhmmmm....