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I absolutely love how you're taking your time with this and not rushing into the meaty SasuNaru interaction. There's so much to chew on we can really get a flavor for the other characters and the background. I dislike that you feel you have to keep attesting to Naruto's lack of 'ukefication' when your portrayal of him makes it clear enough. It's delicious

So, I lay awake thinking about this story last night (briefly obsessive) and I realized we haven't even caught a hint of Sakura's existence. I'm of the opinion that Naruto needs a new psychiatrist and I thought 'wouldn't that be fun?' Also, I don't know if you've already got a personal theme song, but I kept hearing 'Fall For You' by Secondhand Serenade.' I'm running on two hours of sleep since I stayed up to read your fic, so sory for the bizzaroness of the fic

ok.. well this review isnt going to be as awesome as the first one was going to.. stupid back button *glares*
even though i read/heard most of it already, i am going to leave you a detailed account of the way things made me feel..
-your foreshadowing of a kimi/sasu break-up perhaps? *this made me feel like i had chills..cause i did*
-itachi almost telling sasu to invite kimi...*this made me feel like itachi FTW*
-Itachi just... calmly walking away from his father... *this made me <3 itachi more than ever*
-Mikoto.. you write her so that i like her a lot.. *this made me feel like i am glad her eldest son is awesomeness* (insert sasuke hate lit here)
-Naruto jumping on Haku's back was very cute *this made me smile*
-“Not dead yet, eh, Uchiha?” *this made me feel very close to the blonde
-"But not interesting enough for him to move from his perfect spot on the roof, nor to involve himself whatsoever in the situation." *this made me giggle.. <3 Shikamaru-chan
-"Not that seeing his brother making out with another boy (with shirts missing and hands down each other’s pants) turned him on" *this made me think about itachi and sasori being hot *wipes nosebleed**
-Sasuke was as relaxed as Sasuke-ly possible. HAHAHAHAHAHAHA *this made me feel laughter in the pit of my soul*
-mmmmm gaara is coming into the picture... mmmm gaara *this made me tingle in some places*
-“That’s totally cheating! You know I don’t have the patience to wait for a slow ball!” *this made me feel like hugging naruto*
-The cute way Haku and Naru interact in the locker room is adorable. *this makes me want NaruHaku ficage*
-Kimi/Sasu is hot as you write it *this made me think naughty thoughts.
-Neji....FTW...you know how i feel about him in this fic *Neji makes me feel like dancing*
Awesome chapter.. as usual. I hope this makes up for some of the stupid people who dont want to leave reviews.. because they are stupid.
*hits them*
will be waiting/beta'ing your next chappie!
-sk

Mikoto.. you write her so that i like her a lot.. *this made me feel like i am glad her eldest son is awesomeness* (insert sasuke hate lit here)
Naruto jumping on Haku's back was very cute *this made me smile*
“Not dead yet, eh, Uchiha?” *this made me feel very close to the blonde
"But not interesting enough for him to move from his perfect spot on the roof, nor to involve himself whatsoever in the situation." *this made me giggle.. <3 Shikamaru-chan
"Not that seeing his brother making out with another boy (with shirts missing and hands down each other’s pants) turned him on" *this made me think about itachi and sasori being hot *wipes nosebleed**
Sasuke was as relaxed as Sasuke-ly possible. HAHAHAHAHAHAHA *this made me feel laughter in the pit of my soul*
mmmmm gaara is coming into the picture... mmmm gaara *this made me tingle in some places*
“That’s totally cheating! You know I don’t have the patience to wait for a slow ball!” *this made me feel like hugging naruto*
The cute way Haku and Naru interact in the locker room is adorable. *this makes me want NaruHaku ficage*
and you know how i feel about Neji in this chapter... *Neji is my new lover*
i hope this made up for some of the assholes that dont review
-sk

"Not that seeing his brother making out with another boy (with shirts missing and hands down each other’s pants) turned him on" *this made me think about itachi and sasori being hot *wipes nosebleed**
Sasuke was as relaxed as Sasuke-ly possible. HAHAHAHAHAHAHA *this made me feel laughter in the pit of my soul*
mmmmm gaara is coming into the picture... mmmm gaara *this made me tingle in some places*
“That’s totally cheating! You know I don’t have the patience to wait for a slow ball!” *this made me feel like hugging naruto*
The cute way Haku and Naru interact in the locker room is adorable. *this makes me want NaruHaku ficage*
and you know how i feel about Neji in this chapter... *Neji is my new lover*
i hope this made up for some of the assholes that dont review
-sk

Excellent story, first time I saw it here. Different from what I've read before. I was wondering how you were going to get Naru and Sasu together when they don't really have much outside contact. I see that lockeroom is going to be pretty useful for letting secrets out. I can hardly wait to see what happens in the next chapter.

Ja

This is fairly brilliant at this point. It's complicated but not, full of the intricate lies that muck up a person's life but are easy for an outsider to follow. Suzume thoroughly enraged me by her unbelievable close-mindedness as a student of psychology. I am absolutely thrilled to have found this.

holy....shit dude.. i am ROLLIN about S2's penises comment.. wow....awesome. he always WAS a bit strange.

anyway...awesome chapter dude..even though i had been reading pieces of it randomly, it is so much cooler to be able to read them all at once.
in the correct order...

I LOVE Mr-Prefect-Prissy-Pants... that is soooo awesome! I love Tobi wanting to get his whole face tattooed...i love Kisame thinking that a Shark with mom and a heart below it balances things out in the creep department.
i love the hot mini lemons, and understand why they were mini..i LOVE your portrayal of Deidara and of Sai. I love Itachi wanting a red scorpion, i love the way the chapter ended...but MORE THAN ANYTHING ELSE...

i love the brotherly love that was evident toward the end when itachi warned sasuke about their father being home for dinner. i know that you know that i loved that...but i needed to tell others.

and that is another thing...this fic is way too damn good to get spurned all the time with reviews...to the other people reviewing this, and seeing it....congrats..you are awesome. to the people who arent reviewing, and arent going to see this anyways.... you FUCKING SUCK....chumps.

love you lady.
-sk

I apologize for not reviewing earlier. When I read the first three chapters and clicked on review it turned into downtime and I forgot to go back. Anyway, ugh, this story is so much heavier than I even anticipated. Like, it reminds me of college when I was doing a story on a lesbian couple who had adopted kids and the state was making it like impossible for them to actually have real guardianship of them. I just feel like Naruto's situation is so hopeless. I mean there is hope. But if they were in a small town, there are just so many things going against Naruto already. Being a girl biologically, living with lesbian parents...just the social issues surrounding all that, I'm waiting for this to set itself up where it turns out like 'Boys Don't Cry' and Naruto gets bashed in the head with a bat or something terrible.

And I'm so mad at Sazume (sp?). I just can't believe she could get away with being so prejudicial that out of spite she'd slap more medication on Naruto. But I don't think it's implausible at all which totally makes me sick. The idea of hormone treatment really bothered me, and though Tsunade is trying to rationalize it by the good outweighing the evil so long as Naruto can stay with them just ... grr... it's frustrating. Because I'd be calling up like the ACLU and getting that bitches license and credentials pulled. But it just depends on where they live, because if it was like a Southern state or something, I would believe that if the adoption people came around or whoever and saw that the kids weren't being 'treated' for their 'problems' Naruto would be sent to an institution. If it was like NY or Calif I'd be like nah...

grrr... And Sasuke and Kimimaro. I find it interesting how afraid Sasuke is to come out of the closet. His situation also makes me nervous. And Kimimaro is not a bad boyfriend at all. LOL but I love how you pointed out how oblivious Sasuke was about Haku, because Sasuke's trying to live in this world of denial and it just shows how out of the loop he is in regards to accepting his homosexuality and even wanting to be a part of the gay community.

I'm waiting for Sakura! Anyway, good luck with the rest of the story, I hope you're still enthused about it. I'm interested to see how Naruto and Sasuke could possibly interact at all, but I like slow development XD

<3
Ras

ok.. here goes.. i love the gama-chan keychain that naru carries. that is hella cute. and i love that tsunade says DONT CALL ME TSUNADE-BAA-CHAN!!! lmao awesome. Haku nodding his head to the phone is SO something that anyone would normally do.. hehehehe you have such great description. hahaha and Naruto saying "no, im not" to haku saying "i know you're awake" is awesome..Shizune-san is a right bitch ne?...NE?? i really like the dynamic of Shizune... "Naruto got his period today." o.O...i LOVE it...i think it is awesome that tsunade and shizune really embrace the "genders" of their 'kids'...i mean, there arent many foster parents who would do that, and i think it is pretty cool.

I love how tsunade just KNOWS what happened with the shrink bitch and figures it all out.. tsunade RULES
hahahaha i see where jpop saw the drooling.. cause i saw it just as soon as i saw 'doodling' and i giggled

i looked up a Javanese cat...a perfect pussy for sasu..lmaooo couldnt resist.. gomen nasai my love...

yatta for Itachi..i would never admit this... but i am totally in love with the guy.. i mean so much pure evil radiating out of one guy.. you know how i am with my love for the evil, but you should (by now) also know my dislike of liking the same guys that everyone else likes...but Itachi is different.. i KNOW everyone loves him, but i cant help but love him too...and he seems so sincere in his want to help sasuke....awwww

The Yukimura girl? wooooooooooooooooooooooot!!! i love it.. i dont know WHY i love it.. but i do...finding out that sasuke is gay???wtf? anyone who knows him (at least in this fic) should know that he is gay!!! lmao i guess the people at K.J.S.H.S are not quite as bright as they should be ne?

it may be kinda strange.. but Oto kinda reminds me of New Haven.. but MOST of the main street shops are open in New Haven.. i am reminded of Desperation by Steven King as well.. awesome description...i want to live in Oto.
kimi standing up for sasu is really cute!
tsunade and naruto's little time together was adorable! the fact that they made a "deal" was so cute!

sasuke going to find haku... he is so brave, even though he doesnt want to see (hot)Itachi or his friends... Tobi as the "cat who came back"? hahahahaha!!!!

"figuring it was the Uchiha’s own fault he hadn’t asked if Haku had told anyone already." love this line... it is hilarious, and SO haku to me.
Itachi catching deidara's chopsticks and telling him not to point is great...Itachi Uchiha...lord of manners.
nyahahahaha i love air quotes!!!!!!!!!!!!! hahahaha and deidara is the PERFECT one to use them. it would only be more comical if itachi himself had used them

kisime tried to pick up deidara??? woooooot what a pairing that would be!!! roflmao

well dude.. once again you have made me wish a chapter would continue. i cant wait to see what you do with the "akutsuki table" and with sasuke and itachi and naruto and haku.. but you should totally let the bitch shrink have it! dammit!
cant wait for more.. love it.. love you
-sk