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December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
DANG! Right when Sasuke was going to tell him that he loved him...Iruka-chan just had to show up!!! But loved the chapter hoped to read more soon!
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December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love the story!!! But why did you have to end this last chapter with Iruka messing up Sasuke's confession!!! I hope you have a Merry Christmas and I look forward to more of this wonderful story. Thank you for sharing it! :)
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November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well i can't enter the page from my home comp cous of some fucked up reason so i have to print it in school.. erm colledge? enyhow (I live in Sweden) i love this fic lots and lots!!!! and im alweys happy when its updated so t hanks!
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September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it!!! I got an idea. Seeing that Naruto has to get supplies for the local village how about he catches the eye of one of the villagers, male of course. He maybe can own one of the businesses. Sasuke, with his damned Uchiha pride, still hasn't told Naruto how he feels. Even though naruto has feelings for Sasuske he's beginning to feel that the dark nin isn't as interest. What better thing to do is fuck with Sasuke's head. Make this other dude showing Naruto with a lot of affections, gifts, whatever....Make Sasuke jealous....
***thinking*** well, I just thought about this. But ya know it's been done before.....just a suggestion....
Please continue with the chapter!!!!!!
***thinking*** well, I just thought about this. But ya know it's been done before.....just a suggestion....
Please continue with the chapter!!!!!!
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September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ha ha haaa! Jiraya and Kakashi are evil in the most delicious of ways! XD It'd be funny to have Naruto run out of clean clothes and be forced to wear the kimonoes. That'd be sure to get Sasuke's pants twitching. X3 Does Naruto even know how to put on a lady's kimono? D'you think Sasuke should walk in on Naruto when he's half dressed? I think he'd either tackle Naruto or get a geta to the face. Oh well, in the end, you're the boss. ^w^
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September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i so liked this chapter. it was great the way you had kakshi and jiraiyaswitch his clothes. when i read that i was rolling. i can't wait to see the way you descibe the different outfits (if you are so inclined) because i can't wait to see them. i feel like an idiot for missing the thing about gaara and neiji after ereading the first chapter. a couple hours had passed before i read the first and reviewed so please forgive me. but also just because gaara is hooked up doesn't mean that naruto can't attract another demon holder especially with him being in the heat and no limited to the village. are all of the members of akatsuki dead or just itachi and more than likely kisame. did sasuke ever form hebi and if he did i think it would be interesting if suigetsu showed up and even might be competition for either sasuke or naruto although i choose sasuke but that's because i think that possessive sasuke is the shit. not to leave sasuke out of the jealous games if say pein was to show up or deidara maybe as itachi's lover looking to make the past live on with his beloved younger brother wouldn't be bad. how about having a plant molest naruto. i saw this one with braches that was touching people in places that shouldn't technically be touched by salad. that's a real picture to see getting you salad tossed by salad. random animals attacking sasuke and spraying naruto would be a hoot. i can't remeber if kabito and ochimaru are alive or not but if kabito was to show up in the nearby village that wouldn't be bad either. thanks for the great update and can't wait til the next one.
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September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter three had me giggling like a schoolgirl. *giggles more* Sasuke's not going to let Neji hog Naruto for three weeks. X3 lol XD
I'm glad my advice could help you. I look forward to the next chapter! ^o^
I'm glad my advice could help you. I look forward to the next chapter! ^o^
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September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm ready to read more.....this is gonna be so good!!!!! Please post soon!!!!!!
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September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i guess naruto is about to get a change in escort (yippe. are you going to have neiji have romantic or friendship feelings. if friendship what did neiji do when naruto and he was together. is the safe house in suna the same question applies to him as neiji (friends or wants more). does naruto being in heat effect gaara at all. i can't wait to see the next chapter.
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September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh oH! Nice fic!! I like it a lot so far...it's quite promising XD
I hope you're going to write more to it cause I strongly believe the best is to come! ^.^
I hope you're going to write more to it cause I strongly believe the best is to come! ^.^