rate_review Reviews

Absolutely fantastic, excellently written in every sense. Thank you!

Every time I read this series of stories I'm amazed at what a great writer you are... you create a complete storyline that's riveting, hot and interesting on so many levels!

I really liked this story. The storyline was awesome, the characters stayed in character very well, I really like your version of Ibiki. Thank you for a great story, please keep writing!

really this was quite good and filled with subplots. well written :)

Wild! I got to process this one before I comment. More Later!

Well this was really clever--three sets of plans intersecting and a slutty Izumo added in. The structure of the story--the decision to gradually reveal the plans inside plans by the use of four points of view was really brilliant. The moment where Kakashi stands over Iruka with his mask off--wonderful! It's sort of funny how you solved the sorrow over Sasuke by Ibiki's vows. I, like others, wonder if the unusual absence of Naruto perhaps is because he is being saved for Sasuke, eh? Or Ibiki? Now that I'd love--once Ibiki gets some man ass, he can't get enough, and what better way to keep his vow than to keep Sasuke by his side all the time? Interestingly you didn't have Ibiki's "dislike" of man-sex linked to his torture, but that would be a logical reason, but perhaps too dark. I was half expecting Kakashi to have taped the damn thing again, but I'm glad that didn't happen. I really liked Kakashi's jealousy of the gentleness between Izumo and Iruka. Gosh, it makes me want to write an Izumo and Iruka story, but I'll just read on and see if I get more of those two in another story. Oh, I forgot to say how much I loved Shikamaru's little appearance--which nicely sets up for my favorite of your stories!

Wowzers! I totally didn't see that ending coming!

Poor Sasu-chan, Kakashi is going to break his heart into itsy bitsy pieces!

And Kakashi getting well and truly screwed over! Priceless! See how you like it, to be used and tossed aside like a dirty diaper. And how Iruka doesn't have the time of day to give Kakashi in the end? In yo' face beyotch! And even Ibiki won't give him comfort sex...it's just u and ur hand tonight!

Will Iruka have Kakashi now that he's had some of the kind of sweet lurve he's been craving? Will Ibiki have a sexual orientation crisis? Will Sasuke ever find love? (Will there be more hot mansecks?) Find out next time in 'All My Chuunin'

beautiful. Just beautiful.

Kakashi is not a genius, he was a prodigy. There is a difference. And I'm pleased that Iruka is happier, Kakashi has finally gotten two thoughts to rub together in that selfish head of his, and that Sasuke is apparently no longer going to be so tormented.

Iruka and Izumo are part right: Ibiki is not a kind man, but he is a good man. He is a very good man.
And like any good man, he does whatever he has to do.

Damn, Ibiki is good at his job. XD
I think i mostly enjoyed his interaction with izumo, and the way that sweet chuunin always reacted exactly the way Ibiki wanted him to.
And the intense wall fuck? ^^ fuck, that was hot. Even if it was Ibiki who did the fucking. ( i think i have a problem with him being involved in yaoi.. ^^´)
Lol.. you make me use that one word far too often. XD

Ow, this chapter was so hot!
I love blindfolded Iruka, That's so hot.
Ibiki doing Kakashi on the dresser made me sweat. *nosebleeds all over*
I liked the way you ended it. Kakashi shouldn't get what he wants all the time,
It's good that he learned a lesson.
I'm glad Sasuke has someone looking over him.
Great story!